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Hekdxu
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- July 1,2024
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Its just i wanted to read n gud story developmnt
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An amazing read š, the character ,plot twist.. everything is beautiful
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This story has an interesting premise, but it feels like it's missing a lot of key details. Some important moments that should have been fleshed out are instead rushed through in just a few lines, making it hard to fully understand the progression of events. At times, it feels as if large chunks of the story are skipped, leaving me confusedālike Iāve missed several chapters in between.The pacing also feels inconsistent. For example, the FL was initially determined not to trust anyone, yet she suddenly starts trusting the ML and even kisses him after just a few words. Similarly, despite knowing the true colors of certain characters from her past life, she still chooses to work with them again, which doesnāt quite make sense.Character backstories are also unclear. How did they all meet? What happened during the three months leading up to the apocalypse? Details about the FLās life before everything changedālike whether she was rich, poor, or middle classāare vague. The setting also shifts abruptly, such as her going from living in an apartment to suddenly staying in a jungle cottage, with no clear explanation.While the suspense and dark atmosphere are engaging, they sometimes overshadow the main apocalypse theme, making it feel even darker than expected. Additionally, some scenes seem to be written mainly to lead to romantic moments rather than developing the plot naturally.Overall, while the story has potential, it could benefit from more consistent pacing, better transitions between events, and deeper character development to make the narrative feel more cohesive and immersive.
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Talk about getting a crash course in a new world! Just a few chapters in and I'm already want to read more. This is one to keep in your collection!
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I hope this gets updated more frequently, I honestly love it..
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Pacing is way too fast and character interactions seem forced, not enough details and background information. Fights need some work as well.
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Overall I really love this bookI was gonna just read it casually but I'm very much invested now ššIt has a great story line and it's different from other rebirth novels. I love it so much all I hate is that bish Wen Li
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the story is overall wonderful. I can't wait to read more chapters. hopefully I don't have to wait long dear Author
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It's because I'm the author that I give this a 5 star. HAHAHA
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Honest review. I bookmarked this story as a "potential" read when it showed up in my recommended list, then promptly ignored it there for about a week. What a dumb move. The synopsis didn't really move me a great deal which is probably why it wasn't until I was cleaning my library of dropped and dissapointing novels that I decided to give a look at the first 20 chapters, just to be fair, before ditching this as well. Best move ever. By chapter 50 I had already called in sick to work, fixed a plate of snacks, and settled on to the lounge for a day of binge reading. The more I read, the better it got. There was a block of chapters just after the 100 milestone where I started to doubt whether I made the right choice to unlock all available chapters in advance, but after deciding to eat some cement powder and harden up, I found the novel got back on track and even went to another level again.This novel has an enormous amount of potential and I sincerley hope the author can see this through for at least another 1000-2000 chapters. If you are reading this, do yourself a favor and get on board, you won't be dissapointed.
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I will seeking for more episodes ...classic story... carry on genius! ā„ļø
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Author came back from the dead and dropped a new work! This has similar plot to your 1st novel, its's good so far, just like slice of life. It's waiting for the action cause that's what I like in your novel before.
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