
The Female Supporting Character Just Wants To Live A Good Life
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Author:
Xian Yu Lao Ren,咸鱼老人,
- Status: Completed
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Josei Romance Slice of Life Beautiful Female Lead Blind Dates Business Management Businessmen Childcare Doting Love Interests Doting Parents Familial Love Female Protagonist Handsome Male Lead Love Interest Falls in Love First Marriage Marriage of Convenience Misunderstandings Modern Day Multiple Reincarnated Individuals Older Love Interests
Rating(4.3 / 5.0, 46 votes)
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The storyline is clean and there were no major misunderstandings in my reading. However, I found it unsatisfactory when the FL conceived. What I particularly appreciated about the male lead (ML) was his emphasis on wanting an equal partner, not a child bride. He was initially uncomfortable with the age difference but recognized the FL's emotional maturity. This ensures a balanced dynamic without any power imbalances.
If you're looking for a low-drama, realistic relationship development story, I highly recommend giving this novel a try.
ML's interest in FL stems from her rare display of kindness, making her stand out. The parents, particularly FL's, are excessively affectionate, especially when it comes to finding a partner for their daughter even during her school years, although it's presented as caring.
The novel itself is rather平淡, with a slight detour after the birth of their child, which introduces a spoiler. The author's perspective on childbirth and parenthood is unconventional, which adds an unusual touch.
Fortunately, it was a quick read, or I would've dropped it earlier.
The author effectively uses the protagonist to critique common clichés in romance novels, highlighting absurdities like waiting a decade for a loved one to return. These observations are sensible and thought-provoking. Unfortunately, the author overplays this theme by excessively explaining in author's notes and repeatedly emphasizing how different her story is from typical tropes. This approach eventually gives the impression that the author and the main character have a subtle superiority complex.
If the author had refrained from excessive commentary and allowed readers to draw their conclusions organically, the writing and the protagonist would have appeared more insightful, relatable, and distinctive compared to others in the genre.
Moreover, the MC's reactions are inconsistent. She becomes overly anxious about not being able to change her outfit for a dinner, struggles to justify herself to her mother, and fails to communicate her feelings to ML, which doesn't demonstrate maturity. Her interactions with her friends feel shallow and uninteresting, as they mainly discuss mundane topics without progression or substance. The author fails to provide vivid descriptions of the characters, such as their appearance, clothing style, or personalities, which is crucial for establishing a connection with them.
After 20 chapters, I still have no clear image of the MC's physical appearance or personal preferences. Despite her claimed love for art, there's no evidence of her engaging in any artistic activities. The author missed an opportunity to showcase her character through a scene of painting or expressing herself creatively.
The fact that the story takes place within a novel context feels irrelevant if the MC isn't invested in it. The MC's lack of concern raises questions about the reader's investment as well. The MC's parents, initially portrayed as caring and protective against arranged marriages, exhibit conflicting behavior with constant reminders and pressure about blind dates, almost treating their daughter as a means to impress others.
In summary, the story suffers from numerous flaws, lacking a genuine slice-of-life feel or emotional healing aspect. The promising premise is undermined by poor execution and a clear lack of storytelling effort. At its core, the narrative feels hollow and unfulfilling.
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