So far, it's brilliant, glad to see you writing a new novel and wish it gets the recognition it deserves, couldn't read further because of work, but I look forward to the train home.The MC is great so far, very relatable.

when i read the mc is indian, I'm hoping to find some Bollywood type action, but this, this even better.

the story is beautifully written  very captivating and intriguin,  is very understandable and unique. Highly recommended, hook readers for more. keep going ...

This is one of my works that is very close to my Heart <3 I will give it a full 5 as it has made me go through so much thinking and brainstorming but the end work is worth it :D Please read and enjoy the journey along with me <3

This story is a triumph of creativity and narrative depth. From the very first chapter, it captivates with a gripping plot that masterfully balances suspense, emotion, and unexpected twists. The intricate storyline unfolds at a perfect pace, keeping readers on the edge of their seats while offering moments of profound reflection.The characters are a standout feature, crafted with such complexity and authenticity that they feel like real people. Each one is uniquely compelling, with their flaws, dreams, and growth adding layers to the narrative. Their interactions are raw and meaningful, driving the story forward in ways that feel organic and powerful.What truly sets this apart is its originality. The plot dares to explore uncharted territory, introducing fresh ideas and perspectives that feel both innovative and relevant. It’s a rare gem that pushes the boundaries of storytelling.This isn’t just a story—it’s an experience. A must-read and undoubtedly one of the best new stories of the year.

Great character growth and development,absorbing context and really nice novel.

Author can I ask if you were offered the contract or you applied for it btw nice stroy keep it up

This is good. Its like a more of a movie script than a novel. The guns and machines were cool, and the army was awesome. The novel doesnt feel like a novel, its more like someone studied film and wrote a script. And sometines author adds characters on the side that needs to be explained, like a movie giving hints. But it doesnt work on this novel type

I'm read it once you last 500 chapters I'm waiting that long for other authors too so I have something to read

Please read this before you start the novel. 🦋   First of all, there’s no rape or miscarriage in this book, but please note that the content will be explicit and may be sensitive for some readers.    I value feedback and criticism, and I read and appreciate every comment and gift.    If you spot a plot hole, please let me know, as sometimes the story takes over and I might forget to fill the gaps. Thank you so much for reading, and if you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to ask—I promise I don’t bite! ✨

I hope he updates daily. novel is good and so far it's been entertaining

Hi Author Here. Just rating my story 5 star 😏..if you have any questions feel free to comment here I'll be sure to answer ..