The Enemy's Daughter

Please Stop Staring.It’s weird and kinda annoying.Though I really can’t blame you,After all, I’m too handsome.Why’s it so hard to be ordinary?Why’s it so hard to be low-key?I swear by my life,I really didn’t want to be this good-looking.*siiigh~*

So, not really a review (for good balance i put a 4/5) because i'm just near the 15th chapters.Honestly the writing etc. is good but i lack passion for this one.I think the "sims simulator pov and writing" is killing me (i know for the cliffhanger about that).if it's like that all the time, I'd rather quit.If a charitable soul can answer me that would be nice.

I had to drop this after reading to the 4th chapter that quality is horrible and you can barely understand what is going on. The sentences don't make sense half the time.

Note to author: Please don’t give up writing your story, no matter what people say in the reviews. Nothing is more satisfying then to get the story in your head down for someone else to read :P Take the comments to heart, but don’t take them personally. Constructive criticism🤗 Work at improving your craft so your story can constantly improve. Best way to edit is to read what you wrote out loud; your ear will hear when to use punctuation, those natural pauses. Pay attention to when the way you read it doesn’t match HOW you wrote it. Make sense? Watch for run-on sentences, which are long sentences that work better when broken into two or more sentences.Mentally use both words, like “they are” instead of “their/they’re” so it’s easier to see when to use the contraction.Do your own personal edit before you post. The fewer grammatical errors there (their/they’re) are, the more people will focus on the content of your story.Good luck, and enjoy the experience!

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Oh dear author pls more. I give this novel five rated stars because this novel has made it up to the top 5 novels i love no top 3  novels i love. I wish for u  author  to have great success with this novel u have all my love and vote but pls post more ❤❤❤❤❤💓💖❤❤

Very interesting plot . keep it up . this work is very unique

"Those that want to live, come forwards and grab your friends limbs, carry their bodies here and dispose of their armor. Hurry up if you want them to live! Show me you're still humans and will fight for humanity!"