Good writing! I like the sibling bonding. It felt so natural. First 3 chapters are well developed. Gonna continue reading…

I’m creating a dark era within Jianghu — a world of shadows and blood...

So far, I really enjoyed the story.I am looking forward for reading more chapters and also the future adventures of MC, his women and family.

This novel has a ton of potential and the Author plans to let the viewers tread it's path.The overall rating should explain the quality of this novel already.So, keep up the good work Author and please maintain this consistency and effort.Thank you!Ps: I won't be able to get past paywall without using free passes but I'll try to continue reading along.

This is the author speaking Guys this is my first time writing something Please review the work and tell me how to improve Thanks.......🥹🥹

First , I am putting my all my efforts into writing the novel , editing it , then translating it and editing it again . Therefore , I hope for your encouragement and interaction no matter how simple it may seem to you , it means a lot to me.The novel will be amazing and uniqueThe story is better then a lot of famous novel's stories and i am doing my best to make it logical and develop in correct wayI think i create a new type of novels when the MC reincarnate but 5 years before the appearance of my RPG gameMy novel will contain 3 parts every new one will be much bigger than the old oneThe firs part is the story in the real EarthThe second is in the game when we will have a world between fantazy and cultivation The third is when the humans travel to the new world or the game's worldWe will have more parts but it will came latterI will make a work similar to my favourite works with more than 3000 chapitres and i need your support and helpIf you are interested in being a caracter in my novel ore have any ideas feel free to contact me ire write it in the comments

I love the story so far. I love the concept of it and how it dives into a system, yet it gives me the feel of not everything being OP> The vibes remind of the book, Blood Warlock Succubus (whatever the title was) in terms of concept, and I really loved that book. The writing quality is also really good, and it's an easy and smooth read. Definitely something I recommend to people who like the post apocalyptic style of writing. Great work!

so far so goodI like what I am reading it's paced nicely not too slow not too fastfeels like a breath of fresh air in all the repetitive webnovels

Nice , i will add this to my collection. I will continue reading it too."Mythical Holiday Gift , Be Mine Now" the mc is likeable to be honest hehe

This is more of a question than a review (currently in CH10)  why would you return the limiting human aspects when the story was just getting good? In no novel ever has emotions ever led to good plot. Decisions become reckless for lack of  a better word. Why not just proceed with the plant based evolution? How did Sumi jump from wanting to enjoy her time to looking for more work(burdens) It's quite frustrating finding a good read then you take us(me) back to the common tropes

bruh it's a full blown ntr novel I thought it was netori last half hour was so bad for me tch .never gonna believe sypnosis

I am reading this novel from the begining.  Now i think i should write a review for it. This story is good but authors need to make his writing quality more better.. There are sometimes somethings happens so suddenly.But i think if the writer fix this problems this story have so high potential . You should give a try to it.