The Alpha’s Eternal Mate

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Can only be said to be decent. It’s not good nor bad. It’s a system and eastern fantasy novel with a couple twists. It’s enjoyable to read and grammar is nice. However there are a couple bad character designs. Firstly, MC reincarnates and inherits a system. This system makes it so that he can exchange points for op items. The former soul had 9 disciples which were all evil since the former soul was evil as well. There are a couple plot holes in the story. For example, MC reincarnates as an evil person who had an extremely powerful soul and lived over 900 years. MC himself has lived for less than 30 years I’m assuming and has a weak soul. Apparently he inherits all the 900 years of memories and still stays the same? This doesn’t make sense at all. He should have had an extreme personality change at least but probably still should’ve lost his mind and started believing that he was the previous soul. After all, 900 years of life is a lot more than 30 years. He shouldn’t have been able to stay the same because he was just a mortal in his previous life, he didn’t have a powerful soul nor mind. He didn’t even have plot armor at this point. I’m guessing the author just forgot about this. Anyways, the next plot hole is that he doesn’t stay evil. He changes to good. This is really a major plot change since I personally came to read about an evil villain trying to control his disciples. I didn’t come here to see a goody-goody hero MC change his evil personality to good and also make his evil disciples into righteous disciples. The title and synopsis are very misleading in this case. It should be called, “My Good Disciples.” The synopsis should’ve stated all of this and I blame the translator/ author. Anyways, this really doesn’t make sense since the system is also a good system. The previous dude was evil but had a good system? This is a big plot hole. I don’t really like this novel because of how misleading it was. I read the title and synopsis and thought to myself how awesome this novel could be. I couldn’t wait to read about an evil MC who lost all his power try to control his evil disciples who would kill him if they knew he lost his powers. The system was kind of weird and random as it didn’t really fit in. I didn’t see the purpose of a system but I thought that it might be there to help the MC to gain his power and also to help make some arcs. But I was disappointed very quickly. The ‘evil’ Mc is actually a good hero. The evil disciples are actually becoming good disciples because of the MC. The system is a good system and it’s giving the evil MC missions to change to a good MC. This was really disappointing. The entire synopsis and title was completely wrong. Also I’m really sorry author but this plot sucks. I doubt you could keep this story going for longer than 200 chapters. If you do keep it going for longer, the quality will drop by so much that it will be able to cause a coma by reading it. If you make the MC progress to slow, the quality will drop by chapter 100. If you make him go at a medium speed, the quality will drop by chapter 175. If you make the MC go fast, the quality will drop by chapter 70. I wish you luck author. My advice is to make him go at medium speed and write maybe 200 chapters. I get that you’re being different but this really isn’t how you do it. You were supposed to get rid of the system. Keep the MC’s evilness. The plot should be that the MC is supposed to climb his way back up to the peak while keeping his disciples under check. It should’ve been like those reincarnated god novels where the MC reincarnates and has to start from scratch. However the disciples and evil mind personality would have given them a unique read. If you had done this, you would have been able to write 500 chapters of decent quality or either 300 chapters of excellent quality. Now that you’ve screwed the plot by making it a goody-goody MC, you can at best write 500 chapters of garbage quality or 200 chapters of decent quality.

Read till 252It becomes complete 💩 as it difficult to understand It looks like different people were writing it one after another without synchronization. I had some fun reading it, but enough. It doesn’t seem like it will become betterDropping

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The book is interesting to read. It seemed to be different concept than other books I read. Let's see how it will be in future

"The gateway is opening and I need to be there. This is a huge opportunity to strike back at the Wraiths, one that I can not miss." Ni Yenzi replied.

Cahir grunted, "Then stop the Hyperdrive."