I love a good arrangement relationship💜💜💜💜

T/N: Am still a novice in translating novel, No group, No team, No partner, just me for fun…Like they say, I don't know who said it, be shameless once a while. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Generally speaking, a better grasp on English vocabulary and speech would make a good addition to the dialogue writing. The characters have good descriptions and the world building is on point with the plot progression but I feel that the narrative itself could use a little nudge based on the actions the characters are taking. Also, the advice you may have read about 'Show - not - Tell' has better interpretations. Show the actions from the perspective/ thoughts of the character in action rather than telling a description of the situation in which the actions are taking place, there is no fault in the descriptions but a central/dedicated theme allows for more instruments to join the music. Ciao!

Kesini liat vt lu bang, dan pas baca lumayan bagus juga. dunianya kompleks dan rumit, jadi gak sabar nunggu eksplorasi dunianya secara lebih lanjut lagi

The best thing I have ever laid my eyes on(Ps he wrote me very accurately)

I have read till chapter 11 and  I Don't Have Any Complain With The Story, The Plot Progression Is Smooth, As Per Now Not much of a character development but, he haven't gonna out of his mansion and interact with other characters so, I wouldn't say much on it but, I really hope author will give us more information as story unfolds

Story is okay. Just not my cup of tea. The synopsis makes it seem like he becomes this OP villain and eventually pulls a badass goddess as a wife. In reality the Mc forces the goddess into a soul contract and is super weak. My guess is he won’t truly be a strong villain until the very end and I’m not really willing to wait that long, or spend the money on coins just for him to be slightly powerful. After his deal with the goddess he’s cursed into oblivion and no can no longer hold a weapon, learn spells/techniques, or control mana of any affinity. So we go from OP Mc to cursed Mc. It’s perhaps my least favorite way for authors to slow down power progression. You can slow growth without debuffing your character.

books nice , its casual and not uselessly big on details according to me , last i read and now that I read it again , the author has reworked the free chapters and it's better now this way , Appreciate your work author , keep up the good work.

It is very interesting can you please quickly release the remaining chapter

One of the best webnovels I have ever read.... whether it's the character development or story genre.... everything's very unique...plus it's a fast development.If you are looking for a fast developing and no cliché novel with adventure  and weak to strong genre ......this is the perfect webnovel for you.Take my word for it.And lastly I thank the author @Peltivierre for this wonderful webnovel. I hope that you continue uploading this novel until its end.Thank You

fire book, great storyline, awesome MC, I look forward to seeing more chapters, author please update regularly

so far i love it....thanks to the authors for the great idea....