Very good!! Please continue updating and keep it up.

A good domain.   The book is  great except for few errors.

Isn’t this a bit pointless since France would win anyways, even Paris wasn’t destroyed since hitler liked its art

It sounds interesting man! But at chapter 1 I got 2 points: Too much stuttering😂 and also mixing up the tenses, but that is not something necessarily bad. To me some just some of the sentences sound weird. Also it might be a bit confusing, but I guess that’ll solve itself when you continue the story.As a starting author myself, I must say that the story’s got potential man, so keep writing.

Is there romance in this novel? please no it holds back the MC

I hate memory loss arcs. But I know it’ll get way better! Hopefully my glorious 🐐 THE BOSS continues to show why he’s the best written character ever. I love all your books so I know this is a automatic 5 stars!!!

Interesting take, but in real life or at least logical viewpoint his family is his biggest flaw and weakness. When you climb high enough in the ladder we call the “hierarchy” your enemies will try to bring you down. I like the your novel but I would just prefer him being cold hearted with no weaknesses to exploit, but it’s just me 🫡

Omo it's just starting but i love it already.

Words can't describe how amazing this book is, it's a shame I've discovered it after three years. The author really did a grt job I fell in love with all the characters and Aito's emotions were described to perfection👌👌👌

the novel seems to be a fun and lighthearted adventure with plenty of humor, unique characters, and a very unconventional hero. It's perfect for readers to enjoy a comedic twist on the hero's journey.

Elf never seizes to amaze with with her entertaining plots and characters,  just the first chapter and I'm already invested, i am definitely reading this. i have added to library and voted. wishing you best of luck  hope you win WSA💓💓. And of course, highly recommend. vote too, let's support our dear Author.

Wow hooked just with two chapters and can't even wait for more , I hope releasing is everyday🙏❤❤