Supreme Monarch of Eternity

This is really well done,. Character,plot,romance all well done and doing good so far so I hope this gets picked. It can be very addictive if you like the genre.

another webnovel scam, theyve been poping up alot lately where the free chapter are properly translated but then the rest is bad mtl translation

well i caught up with the story. the mc is meant to be o,p we get that, but the little things count. where did he learn alchemy?where did he learn so much about the world and other species? when did he learn to even fight? what books did he read? his clan basically only owns a town where the ancestor was basically a rogue cultivator before settling down 10k years he probably learned a lot but we never had a chance for us to see the mc at least tour the place just a baby who cultivated so when did he learn so much from? theres no slice of life its just a little lucky mfer with no context.  i get its supposed to be a face slapping novel but the characters are just stupid he went there beating up everyone in 4 chapter long fights when he can obviously one shot them y? his goal is immortality so he wastes his time and energy on trash i dont get it. its just one face slap after another repeating theres no development or a real story its stupid. the world and the concept is the only reason im even still reading. and i believe the author even forgot the mc is a BABY. wheres all these punches and kicks comming from? its a baby it cant punch or kick hold a sword anything without being right in your face so you cant even imagine the actual fights thats one after another the moment the mc went to the mystic realm is where the story took a nosedive. before it was on track a BABY isnt fighting in a melee. a BABY isnt punching a kicking you. a BABY cannot hold a friggin spear. an OP BABY should be sitting back shooting lighting using the arrays using long ranged skills or using their brain not trying to fight people in a melee it just doesnt make sense. this doesnt deserve a 3, but its only giving that score because i rated high on translation and the stability of updates everything else is a 2 except the world background at 3

Hi there!Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more!This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact [email protected] luck for writing!

                                                                                                                                          I’m totally biased.

Considering it's a translation, I won't  bother reviewing the story. Suffice it to say, it's a dumpster fire. Read if you feel like your life is too long.As for the translation. It's understandable, even if the use of English is poor.

I read a few chapters and really liked the start, great storyline author, everything with demons and beasts is always great!!Can't wait to read more!!

1°fffffgggggggt1°ffffffffgjajsdjddjddjjddjdjddjdjdjjjdjdjdjjjd1°fffffgggggggt1°ffffffffgjajsdjddjddjjddjdjddjdjdjjjdjdjdjjjdjjdjjejdkrkdkedkkejjdjj1°fffffgggggggt1°ffffffffgjajsdjddjddjjddjdjddjdjdjjjdjdjdjjjd1°fffffgggggggt1°ffffffffgjajsdjddjddjjddjdjddjdjdjjjdjdjdjjjdjjdjjejdkrkdkedkkejjdjjejdkrkdkedkkeejdkrkdkedkkeddjdjdjjjdjdjdjjjd1°fffffgggggggt1°ffffffffgjajsdjddjddjjddjdjddjdjdjjjdjdjdjjjdjjdjjejdkrkdkedkkejjdjj1°fffffgggggggt1°ffffffffgjajsdjddjddjjddjdjddjdjdjjjdjdjdjjjd1°fffffgggggggt1°ffffffffgjajsdjddjddjjddjdjddjdjdjjjdjdjdjjjdjjdjjejdkrkdkedkkejjdjjejdkrkdkedkkeejdkrkdkedkke