Definitely love the world building, characterization is pretty dope and intriguing. Needs more dialogues to me, but in all, a great book. Love to see more chapters mate

the story itself is promising i like the way it opened the beginning of the story and i like the system, but the characters really do fall flat especially the MC the author is maybe trying to hard to be funny, like the mc i know he is mentally unstable cause of everything that happened but it’s not really fleshed well the author just makes him like annoyingly unserious because he’s insane like a really bad joker and spider-man combined, so it doesn’t flesh his character out well

It has great potential and everything in-between

A work in progress, if you have any ideea tell me about

In my opinion, this is one of the best revenge stories out of the whole site. Done extremely well in term of eastern/slightly western mix fantasy. The highlight is obviously the fight and the main character being out for blood and revenge with infinite aura farm. Of course, this story set up uses the basic there’s always a sky above the sky set up which can feel abit lacking in term of world development which is going to be an issue once the main story point ends (the revenge part) and I hope the author wrap up the story by then. But otherwise. This is a really enjoyable read.

I really hope this is good                                                                                                                                               

DAAMMMNNN!!! THIS BOOK IS FIREE !!!!!!!To be honest, I have always been Kiiara's big fan. Her writing is unique and rare. It's not always when you can feel the characters' emotions. In her books, the characters feel alive, like humans, and their feelings are real. It's quite easy to visualize the scenes too - it makes it so much better. I love the angst trope...and love the character development. The female lead is SAVAGE... Oh lord, it's not every day when your ML and FL clash against each other. And also Oliver, my boy, he's soo fine <3_<3I love this book. It's such a catch and I can see so much potential in this. Keep writing more, Ki <3 ^_^The world needs more of your writing!! Ps: It doesn't feel like it's been 3 years since you took a break from writing!! Your writing is still as beautiful as ever or much more, I would say.  Welcome back, Ki <3

Author, can we have more options to vote?

I will be completely honest I never thought of reading this book.I only found it because of free trail... and I don't know what or why but spend sleeples night only to read as much as it's possible .Concept is marvelous characters fell almost  real well... except few things :hat flame kiddo which I personally hate because his only use is to be pawn without  personality  extort money and kill lot of people using his skills which is completely fine if he would think what he doing I loved when he started using sex as form of escape but ... that it. plot is too havy so it's better to give him adversary who is relatively stronger crush his psyche then magically make over creating horror dreams of ded people plus one person he will rescue. I will not talk about police/knigths because in this world they don't exist. only MC can chase criminals when  they do something even thou he is closer to evil mastermined then hero. Killing few hundred or thousands because of herbs ezi.If you like story about hero who slowly starting thinks of himself as god and losing himself for the fill of power  even thou he isnt  the strongest and all his power where given in the same way he gives them to others people then this book is for you . it's fun solid 4/5 intriguing and fascinating but it lacks reall consequences of action well I can only hope this is only temporary ( concept of church of money and aversion Kaitha because 80% of bishops are corrupted then doing exactly the same or worse thing for money is sad and funny at the same time )

Ok Translation. Story itself is as cliche as it gets. Worldbuilding is good, reminds me a bit of og Dragon Age

A fun read so far and interesting enough to keep me invested. The story is not overtly complex and carries a light tone most of the time with elements of light humor to spice up the chapters. The way the simplicity honestly helps the story in my opinion and makes the progression seem natural through the MC's perspective and provides vivid imagery for characters and battles. I would have personally boosted the review to 5 stars but the spelling mistakes and the MC having about an average intelligence (when the MC gets an opportunity to achieve a lower profile is not noticed immediately even though they complained about their appearance in the previous chapter) drives it somewhat down for me. I admit though that I am biased in this matter as I enjoy genius types of characters and most would probably overlook these matters.

So far so good, it was a fun reading, the pace is acceptable.. Looking forward to what whould happen to Sir Francis...