Great start of the novel have some potential

The book was starting to get interesting as the story unfolds. The author managed to correct the mistakes from the past chapters and the writing is much more understandable than the previous chapters. Keep up the good work author!

hello it's author here novel is under development if you have any opinions or advise pls share with me.

Here I am after the 3 chapter rule and this is my review for now. My mood can swing and some of the fellow readers may not find my review helpful, so keep in mind that different opinions and thought could also be called individuality.The writer seems inexperienced and inconsistent. While I myself am a new reader, I am here to speak the negatives.Spoilers ahead...The story follows an average character whose name was revealed at chapter 2 (Park Sohyun) this was something that should be revealed in chap 1. He was streaming a game called 'Lost from Grace' till he found himself stuck in the game as it's tutorial boss Vanitas von Syche, a typical prideful noble. The protagonist has mentioned many times that the world of the game is soon to be crumble. I don't know why but I feel like despite him saying that he isn't serious at all.In the end I wanna say characters are a little unusual or unique you may say, but they are far better than few novels I've read in this site. The pacing is slow or sometimes too fast to digest so it is confusing but if luck is on my side and I could bear reading this, I hope it could atleast be a decent novel in the far future. May the author improve consistency and his pacing.

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this book is AWESOME, I have NEVER read anything like this in my whole life. cheers to ARI LEE.

i would and will sell my soul for this book and marry the author simply because they wrote something this awesome

The writing quality is just it. I'm not quite sure what the plot is yet,maybe bcs I'm slow but I know I'll catch up soon😁

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The synopsis leaves much to be desired. The exposition at the start of the first chapter feels a little too long but it's bearable. It reminds me of the common light novel trope of Hero vs Demon King. Lastly, the start feels slow compared to the premise of the novel. It likely would be more hooking if the start is a flashback of some sorts to a battle. An extra tidbit here: some descriptions of an object's external features feel half-done as I couldn't imagine it clearly

Author here again, to drop another review to inform you all of my mass release goals that i would love for us to hit. 500 Power stones= 2 extra chapters 500 Golden tickets= 2 extra chapters.Magic castle= 5 extra chapters Spacecraft= 10 extra chapters.Golden gapachon= 15 extra chapters.Once any of these goals have been met, I will release the chapters as promised without withholding a single chapter back I promise. So why not let us hit this goal together 😊

is it me or is this hard to read and understand