Scalded Hearts

A very light and heart warming story. It gives you different types of people and views in life. Keep it up! It’s a great story about family, friends,life and also for   Ones self

Eu tô achado a história maravilhosa Até agora tô amando os personagem  ansiosa pelos próximos  capítulos Do novel  gosto muito do novelÉ uns dos melhores que já vi

This is utter trash with dumb mc....I don't even know what to comment anymore 😂😂😂Welp, i'll still read this though... i want to test my patience... see how far i could get before i smash my phone in anger 😂😂

the thing that rlly bothers me about this novel is the inconsistency in the story and how everyone and their mothers are so gung-ho about pk-ing that its just a major turn off from the story. Like how you would skip the parts about the mc dungeoning and the spend 4-7 chapters about him getting pk-ed or mc pk-ing. the plot inconsistency is rlly bugging me out, like how you plotted out the story beforehand and then when u go to write it its nothing like the story you plotted out already, and more of just sitting down and improvising the whole thing. there was something i was rlly looking forward to later in the novel but all of a sudden getting that event pulled out from under my nose made me deduct major points from this novel. and idk about anyone else but when i read a novel about a game i like seeing the numbers, equip stats, player stats, dmg numbers and stuff like that. but having it all suddenly disappear for like 70 chapters only to have it reappear for like 2-3 chapters rlly grinds my gears(200 something chapters as of this review) most annying part is when u read the story it skips around and back like u forgot to mention something and just decided that all of a sudden it becomes canon. u cant be like "wow he just soloed a boss thats higher level than him" to all of a sudden "o hes not strong enough to take this boss on yet" inconsistency is the key if that was fixed id totally be onboard to continue reading but for now its a no for me.(** if this doesnt count as contructive criticism and gets deleted will be posting it multiple times till it doesnt)

Really nice, but where's the rest now🙄🙄🙄... Thought it was complete, ooh God!!! Mira pls update now....🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

It a great story to read. It takes a unique way of using the seven sin to gain power.Hope people give it a shot to read this story. It really interesting read hope other enjoy it.

Hello, there, author. As promised, I'll give you brutally honest review.As I've said in the other day, you need to fix how you write the dialogue but I see no improvement.I mean, why you do you use "<" and ">" to separate the dialogues and paragraphs instead of ("Blas bla, bla.). Your story is good, but ruined by your ignorance to learn the proper writing techniques.good luck.

A wonderful novel all around, I love the development of various concepts being introduced into the world and seeing the reactions of people unfamiliar to those concepts in the form of the commonly followed trope of reincarnation, look forward to the development of the Seven Deadly Sins and the Four Horsemen of Apocalypse, on that note, what about making a counterpart of the seven deadly sins called the Seven Heavenly Virtues?