Really interesting start, i like the concept and the way how story starts with action. keep up the good work

Here is my thought about this book based on 1-10 chapters:World Building: The world building is good with the description of the high advance technology,  planet craddle and the atmospjere of the world. The author also give the world situation too. I really like the mystery of the cube and I hope the author can fleshed out even more for that. I also like the first chapter set up the mystery of the shard.Characters: Elias for me is a quite good protagonist, but I suggest to flesh him out espefially related to his backgrpund and paat. A for the side characters such as Elara is nice with her role as the besr friend for the protagonist and the shard too.Pacing: Based on my experience, the pace is quite slow, but I believe rhe author wanted to create a neat build up that connected the story altogether.Overall, if you a fan of sci fi, I recommended to check this book.

Thisb is the real deal looks like your still good with the pen/keyboard hope to see the story progress further

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

I'm not exactly a fan of Xianxia, but the author does a better job of portraying the genre compared to many other works I've read. I'd definitely give this one a read!

What will he do about his family when he gets stronger? Do you plan to destroy them all or will you forgive them? If you forgive me, I'll stop reading. They don't deserve any forgiveness. None of them deserve forgiveness. Father, brothers and mother. If you forgive them, they're meaningless.

This novel deserves more attention.                                                                                                                    

This story has an interesting premise and I really enjoy the current development of the story

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I have not read this yet, but skimmed it and plan to read later. I love how it’s starting out. Looks like a lot of potential for a good romance too.

Hello Author,thank you so much for the wonderful story. I just found your book today and read all of the chapters. Your story is really interesting to read and it make hooked. Hope you will update soon.

this is an outstanding novel I really hope for there to be more updates in the future