Rachel's Cabin (COMPLETED AND EDITING)

This is nonsense. I really don't get the point... Most of the story focuses on streamers playing the games and people reacting to them, with a few bits and pieces about the MC, which aren't interesting either. I don't know who this story appeals to...

First I want to say it's really detailed. The author really did a lot of research regarding the system so hats off. Typos are still there. But I could see how well the novel progressed. I would still suggest to edit first 2 chps because I think it will be even better to read just like you had improved the dialogues after that. The world background and the flow of writing is flawless. The MC is cool. And I love how quick witted he is. RIGHT CHOICE of MC absolutely.Lastly I would like to say, the story is improving and I can see clear dedication of the author through the work.Promising Novel. Good Job author.

it started off good  and i really liked it at the beginning it became bad..........................................................................................

Mannnnnnnnn bro I love my little brother 😏, I wonder how he makes so much chapters tho. Making DC, CO, ICS, and now this???? Either way, This book’s lookin good so far. 😏😏😏

Mtled till several hundred chapters. It just got worse and worse, complete waste of time in my opinion..Story Development: Clichéd story. MC just goes from one place to the next, nothing is really fleshed out in the first hundred chapters. MC will never progress even if he literally has all the major resources because the author rushed the first few hundred chapters and wanted to prolong the novel. That's how it seems to me anyways. The story is about the usual human vs demon war, nothing not done before. PLOT HOLES GALORE. Also, the system is majorly used for finding treasures, don't expect the MC to use his brain here. Character Design: Everyone is an idiot. Everyone. The characters are beyond forced and they repeat the same scenario so many times. Think AWE repetitive comedy. The MC seemed a bit interesting at first, but slowly just got more and more annoying. World Background: The first few hundred chapters we learn a little about the world, here and there. It's uninteresting and very expected. Summary: Good for wasting time.

good story so far. Author I'm curious I'd you need a beta reader/Editor? I'm good with English vocab and Grammer. I dont need any money. Please feel free to contact on discord, Fenris#6876

It has a nice plot but I dropped it cause of the mc

One of the rare trial read novels that I actually like, although there are a lot of annoying aspects I don't mind ignoring them because I like the storyline, the translation quality is also good, other than a few cliche tropes and some stupid decisions, the book is alright, some of his stupid decisions aren't as bad as other novels. Anyway give it a try before you dismiss it.