This novel keeps me on edge with every chapter. The psychological depth makes it stand out from the rest. This novel keeps me on edge with every chapter. The psychological depth makes it stand out from the rest

This is actually pretty good so far.  I can tell there is going to be some sort of powers in this, but what they will be is a mystery.  Good world building so far.  Cant wait to see what happens next now that he's back in the wastelands.

In short, the main character is a loser, I don't understand how he became a footballer with such a character. He can't stand up for himself, the first time was when they set the conditions that he would need to take an interview, I thought okay, maybe just once, but then when the owner of Manchester City offers a bet, he hesitates for too long. I just don't understand why, if he knows the result, he should have immediately agreed, or raised the bet, or refused altogether, and now because of one share he has to go to Manchester. And finally, how can he not have a plan on how to tell his family. He either should not have talked about buying the buildings at all or there should have been a convincing reason for the purchase. He came with a bag full of documents, without a plan, and then he had a few hours to at least find an excuse and a reason, but he doesn't know what to say, then he barely tells the whole truth, stuttering and starts thinking during the conversation, and then his mother takes all the money he has left. In short, he's an idiot. What kind of weed was the author smoking?

I highly recommend this novel i don't usually read such a novel i feel in love with this one next chapter thank you author

I enjoyed reading this so well, that I read it all in one sitting. I love the fact that I could tell what some of the characters were up to before they even did that, because I had been pulled into their world. Honestly I am hyped to see how Arato wqould turn out to become an assasin, that is if he ever will, but I can see Nagi taking the initiative. This is a beautiful work. Well done.

bro can you tell power system in extra chapter

A fast-paced and gripping Xianxia novel. The protagonist, a betrayed saint reincarnated to seek revenge and restore immortality, navigates a unique cultivation system based on dangerous Forbidden Daos. His past lives add depth to the action and emotional conflicts. A great read for fans of epic fantasy and complex characters.

Dear readers,This is my first novel, and while English is not my first language, I have poured my heart and soul into this story. It is my sincere effort to connect with readers, and I hope you enjoy the journey I have created.

The synopsis of the novel was enough to make me add this novel to my library and the author made sure he updated his work daily. I will ensure I read it but I'm going to drop this five-stars for the synopsis.

Honestly, I thought this book would be more of a mystery, but it turned out to be a great start. The journey has yet to truly begin!

Good story and love the action.Would like if there were more Chapters.

It's a story with a lot of boring, meaningless, unnecessary monologues. My friend, decide first whether you are writing a poem or a story. This desire for poetic expression is like salt; if you add a little too much, it makes the food inedible. There's also some past life nonsense that breaks the immersion. The character died and was reborn, the event is over, why are you prolonging it? The reason for reading such stories is the person's desire to escape from reality. But you are spoiling the fun of those who want to forget reality even for a moment, don't do this. These are my recommendations, the subject is good, but unnecessary details and whining harm the story.