Please Save My Child

unfortunately, i feel like i have wasted my time reading this, and most of this review will probably be what i dislike about this great novel.a great beginning, that will probably hook in most who like this genre, showing interesting characters as the story goes on. as Will (MC) becomes older, more of the world is revealed, but not explored beyond "this is this, and that is that." although it feels slow-paced, the author is constantly releasing chapters. however, sometimes the writing feels muddy and repetitive, but i think those moments became rarer as i continued reading. i think many people will probably like this story with the exception of a few things like Will's shepherd class, Celine in general, and maybe Will's character. all the way until the tldr at the end are spoilers, so skip if you don't want those.i don't like Celine, mainly because her character is defined as "yandere crazy, but is actually a good person at heart." in the first few chapters she is shown, her only redeeming action was helping Lont. right before she enslaves Will as the price because he was the one to interrupt her experiment. she goes to torture him for the sake of his training and building resistance to dark magic. his reaction is: "She is a good person." Will's only mention of resentment is a single sentence and is only "a little bit." basically, she never looks or seems like a good person, because she never does anything to warrant that besides random thoughts where she sympathizes with Will. an unlikeable character for me.it might just be my bad memory, but i don't think Will has any meaningful character development. throughout the 114 chapters, he is always the happy boy who is kind to others, but comedically narcissistic. besides learning his motivations for the future and maturing in the most obvious ways, he is painfully generic. the only unique thing i can say about him is his narcissistic joke. hopefully his changes are more prominent after he recovers from his apathetic mood around chapter 114 or his training in general.lastly, the entire novel up to now feels like a very, very long setup. i have already said this is slow-paced, because it seems like the author is setting up and showing all of these characters who will be relevant to future plot points. some are even the cause of future plot points (Celine, Ella, Will's mother), but i think this is what ruins it for me. i do not know when this setup will ever pay off, and i'm not enjoying the novel as much as i was before. to me, it's dragging on and i don't want to invest more time into it.tldr; feels like the novel drags on, and many small events that i don't like pile up and ruin my enjoyment of it. it's still a great story, so for those reading this, please do give it a try. it might just be for you.

The book itself is fairly good albeit they keep milking some chapters with fillers but thats the norm on this site. The translator is another stoey altogether. Slow updates lowering the number of updates from the promised amount without so much as a notice. Missing days with no updates nor making them upafter resuming the updatrs. I have to say one of the least professional translator on the site...

I...I don't know what to say of this novel....Unique I guess?Progression - MC --> Sick --> found item --> throw all logic out the window --> become sexy --> bang everyone --> pull money out of his ass --> play god --> Bang ant queen. This novel is the first novel I seen that makes absolutely no sense or has any direction direction. I have absolutely no clue how it is this high in the rankings or why so many people are giving power stones to this novel.I know that the site modifies the ratings on their premium novels. But this novel is just plain unreadable."Suspend your disbelief and you should find happiness". I tried but failed. I just could not continue with the non-sense anymore. The comments in the chapters were really funny and the only thing keeping me interested. that is it. I hope I don't read something like this again and alter some of my logic my brain has built up.

My honest to goodness review: I hate to stop reading upto chapter 2, although I find the story interesting and the plot was piquing, but the lack of proper quotations and the space in between words were giving me a hard time to read thoroughly. Polishing needs to be done, dear author. I like the setting though, of course, it's the Philippines. My country.

Hours later he stood up, he was drenched with cold sweat, the pain was too much he had almost fainted a lot of times. Every time he had to remember that he couldn't lose any time, he might get ambushed at the cave's entrance if someone had a loose tongue.

I didn't know what to do as I looked at the screen searching for what caused that alert.

10 years had passed since then and I had come to learn many things about this world.

"We're being followed," said Allen.