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After the Mc's daughter was kidnapped, it seemed like it took a week before the daughter was found. But, when the daughter was found, she said "... today". Although it wasn't explicitly said that days have passed, you get to know this because the Mc's maid friends were worried cuz she lost a lot of weight while waiting for her daughter. I don't know if one can lose a lot of weight in a day, so I thought that it must have been at lest 3 days since she started worrying over her daughter.
[collapse] honestly it might just be my exam exhausted brain that cant quite get this lol.I find the flow of the story... ok. I like how its sort of straight to the point, but to me it sometimes seem to be super fast. But the MC and her daughter are great, especially their mother-daughter scenes. I think these scenes are the highlight of the story cuz you really feel the emotions that the MC feels, just like when her daughter is kidnapped.Although I cant quite say I like the ML and other characters. Honestly aside from the ML and his daughter, there are no other relevant characters. MOst are just mentioned as "butler" or "maid-friend", and you don't really get to see them unless they are in scenes where they need to. The ML, yeah, I don't understand why he seems over the top with anything regarding the MC. Cuz aside from the MC resembling his wife just because she has a daughter as the same age as his, and her great care for her daughter, I cant quite see why he feels the need to give her a billion other than him not having common sense on how to treat others and how to reward them. But I do find this aspect to him rather cute. And I'm shocked how everyone in their mansion is just "shocked" and doesn't have anything to say or feel on how the duke treats the MC. For the Ml's daughter she is very cute, I like her. But she doesn't seem to have much going on for her for now. cuz we just get to know that she adapted, made friends with the Mc's daughter then that's that. Her relationship with the ML is just kinda mentioned or shown a little. Hopefully the novel will later on mov on to that.But this was a good read, it was had some heartwarming moments and such. But I dont think it has the best writing so far. Though I think the story has some grand conspiracy thing going in the background, so I kinda wanna know about that. Spoileryeah its sus how she know noble etiquette even though she was commoner from birth. Maybe her mother taught her? but why would a commoner teacher know and teach noble etiquette? And a mother and a child who dissapered, and we have a mother and a child here who the ML unknowingly favors. I dont think that they are the real mother and daughter (well their bodies not theirs at least), maybe "eugene" was actually Ml's wife. Cuz if they are the real mother and daughter, then who is the ML's daughter, and why does the MC remember "reina's" memories as a child, and why cant the ML recognize their faces... well that is unless magic is involved I guess.
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