This looks interesting! Keep up the great work! 💪🔥 Wishing you success with your story!

Overall, your grammatical structures has to be enhanced, and substance wise you need a lot of improvement, that was it for constructive criticism. And, lastly the author can do better, your updating stability it decent... Having an average of 2 chapters per day is awesome beginning...

This is a fantastic book that will take you through the ups and downs of the life of a boy who did not know his past, a past capable of scaring nations

Love the action in this novel so much and everything is well written, will be reading more!

i just read the chapter 1 and it made me read more, the storyline characters world building everything was well made, the writing style was top notch, keep up the good work.

Very interisting and nice. Enjoy the Story so far.

okay this is my first novel to read something like this I already like the first chapter great introduction 🥺🥺🥺 I feel very sympathetic as I hate betrayals most huhu great story keep it up!

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One thing I would point out is that it's so simple yet easy to understand the world building that gradually happens, and how the plot manifests itself through the MC's actions and choices. Although there is very much room for improvement with as good as it is, it was definitely quite the enjoyable read.Keep it up, mate

This is a Gold, Story is very original 👌

Author why not uploading for so many days don't abandoned it

Thank you so much for reading, everyone. Will be updating more soon. Stay tuned!