Ethereal World

Very slow paced and uninteresting story.I could only read about 30 chapters before dropping, and most of them felt like a chore to read.In these 30 chapters the MC woke up, went to his uncle, trained and that's it.Nothing special happens and there's too much out of place info dump.It's a cultivator world but so far everything is mundane. Almost no 'supernatural' at all.There's also a lot of bull**** reasonings.If you tell me someone has magic hands and can heal sickness in a magic world, it's fine and I accept it. But if the author tells us that the MC can resuscitate a drowned kid that has been dead for more than 8h with moja sticks and without magic using Tradicional Ancient Medicine from earth... I'll call it bull**** and bad worldbuilding.The story is also undecided. It's a cultivation world but the Mc wants to make gunpownder? Things should be magical but he fixes things with TCM? It makes no sense. For last, the writing is too verbose, with long paragraphs that could be shortenned a lot without losing any content. Don't waste your time on this. It's just bad.

not good , the story is a mess with no details about anything,  the fighting sucks and there is no description of the characters appearance or background

Had a lot of potential, but have either been dropped or on hiatus....................                                                      

The start was promising with interesting ability and mindset of the protagonist.Then this former CEO starts acting stupid like the typical twelve year old isekai MC would.He doesn't use half of his op abilities because he simply is stupid and forgets them half of the time.The romance was forced and contradicts the trust issues the MC should have had.It really got uninteresting for me when it got clear that he, who could impersonate everyone as a parasite and has unlimited possibilities how he could act because of this, just goes to a university of some sorts for some reason. My expectations got completely crushed when the MC just immediatly got a humanoid form for himself like instead of taking something to get more power he takes the almost useless human form that he could steal just as easy from someone else. The soul parasite would have been more challenging to use but had bigger payouts and the advanced void parasite would have also been good. It is just too often for me in this type of novel that the MC just takes the humanform for the sake of it and destroys the interesting setting he was in with it.

Superb Writing waiting for the next chapters.Very eager to know about the race😉🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🙌🏻🙌🏻

One of the web novel I ever read I really enjoying this story I waiting for next chapter now .online the psychological part and the comfort too it's too funny and a same time too dark I like the pase of story to and theirs are lots of interesting funny Character

So far i dont really have any suggestions. I just hope you dont drop the novel. As long as you keep the chapters come I'll keep supporting you. Thats all

I found this was a pretty neat boom at first. Tried reading it, grammar isn't the best but it's understandable most of the time, not all the time. The plot seems to be extremely vague, MC's personality change between his death and reincarnation get glossed over, the interactions feel forced, fake, drawn out. the characters are pretty forgettable, and the 'emotional' moments just aren't. made it to chapter 26 until the story was completely lost on me. Stuff that seems like it should've been a big deal happened like it wasn't.