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zagnar
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- July 1,2024
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The synopsis makes you think this would be the opposite of a cliche story but everything so far is just the MC getting into cliche fights and scenarios. Is the mc different and also aware of the cliches? yes. That doesnβt change the fact that the author is writing the same cliche story. no spirit root mc? check. looked down on mc? check. somehow is in a relationship with the hottest and most talented girl in the story? check. Dumb villains every single chapter? check. The only thing different is the mc knows the cliches.
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This is the whole package β€οΈ hot steamy romance, billionaire, betrayal. Love Love Love this! craving more!
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Hi, readers hope you enjoy this novel and please make sure to give me advice on were to improve my novel and what scene you like.
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Good book, just reviewed to be the first some to review
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Bro has no schedule and likes to post in bursts. But this writing is fire, have you considered writing the Declaration of Independence? Did you write the other 51?
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Damn, It's really good. I mean it. I think the writing quality is good and has good pacing. Currently, I am only at chapter 4, And to tell you the truths, it is really engaging. The engaging part being the main premise, The talking to the spirits thing, I really like it, really do.Though, I haven't actually read much yet.pointers---Writing quality: Better than most other novel I read this year, Do mind, I have read a lot. It's really well written."We are Authors, But also a bunch of miserable wrenches who are constantly fighting against, grammar and Punctuation's" - is what I say.Story-line: Maybe not the best, but is good. enjoyed the family moments and the few shocks the author-san managed to convey. But, I think, I probably, have read other stuffs like this too. Meaning, there are lot of same stories out there, so it probably doesn't have the "why its special and you should read it" thing to it. though, I haven't read much yet, maybe it gets better, I'll let author-san cook. cook hard!Character: the mc. He is interesting, that is all I have to say, Haven't got much content on him yet. the family(damn, he has lots) they are i guess, normal, nothing to add there...overall, good read, will read more in the future, do recommend others and keep up the good work author-san. P.S. I like how they sometimes use Japaneses words in the dialogues. They cute. how? I donno either, but they are.
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I loved it π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯° Very interesting plot and storyline.Amazing characters. Hope they get a happy and sweet ending.Great work Keep it up author.πππππππ
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Okay my little monkeys, I am here with a new novel. This novel is basically a story with a good plot that has smut. It is not the smut that has plot kind. If you are looking for a story with a deep power system, interesting philosophies, good plot, and 3 dimensional characters, I think you are in the right place. Nothing more to say.
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I really recommend your writing author!!!
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Heyy,This Is The Author And Of course,Iβll give My Book a 5 Star because it is worth every penny and time. I call This BookβA time worthy delicacyππ*winks* Join The Ride,updates will come regularly. Add to Library,give your votes,reviews,power stones and gems,unlock the chapters and I will do the work of dropping chapters alwayssss. Muah π½
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good story so far, but is this an original or a translation.
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Keep it up! Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good π π Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Keep it up!
Torn between shadows