I was born into this world through the death of a deer. It was young, innocent, and a pure soul, As I woke up from the ground where the body was I cried for I had its memory how it died from hunters..... it was young, I now was too. It was a beauty too, but when it died the hunters left it since, it was all for "fun" and they laughed and walked away leaving it to be there, all alone, all because they could... I still remember very dimly how terrified it was and how awful it looked after.... well, anyways, as I was saying, I was there wondering why and how I came into this world. I looked around then decided to go see how this world looked worth my own eyes I now had and saw some man? At least I thought it was, but it was actually one of the gods, so uh that was a huge mistake at my part, I should have ran away but no I was so stupid that I wanted to see him closely and when I did I saw his very dark eyes and almost tripped on my hair cause he was so cool! In more ways than one
I really enjoy the mentality of the main character and the beginning of the story did a great job of making me invested and interested on how things will go once the MC turns into a true powerhouse,
Congratulations to our dear Author, Hansora, for the new book! Wish you win the WSA 2025! ✧｡٩(ˊᗜˋ )و✧*｡Now, time for the review.Although I only read 10 chapters, the story pacing was well-written and the character settings were well-done. I read the chapter slowly and yet I fell that it was too short. I need more chapters! (,,>﹏<,,)While the plot starts with a cliche, the smooth narration makes the story flow naturally and lets me immerse in the situation faced by the character. The story has a lot of potential and I can't wait to see how Lari face-slaps the Green Tea fake daughter and makes her parents and brothers regret what they did. And of course, I'm ready to have a toothache from our couple's 'dog food'. (⸝⸝ᵕᴗᵕ⸝⸝)Keep up the good work and best of luck, Author! ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧
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