below average,story pacing is too slow,sometimes it takes whole chapter to describe the appearance of a character,mc don't even use his abilities property,comedy feels pretty forced,

I will be leaving some comments periodically with visuals of the characters in the Novel.This is Scarlett (real name yet to be revealed)Thank you all for the support thus far, I will do my best to try and drop at least 2 chapters a week moving forward

Yeah, the story is ruined for me because why did you add a second person from his world?🤦

amnse is fab fr...characters,drama,plot,twists all of them are so good! btw is this book ongoing or completed???

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A Shameless 5-star review!The main character is a selfish person who is both smart and stupid (mostly the latter). He's also not going to be strong for a decent bit despite having an immense skill ceiling. His growth is going to be slow and believable, as this is intended to be a long 1k ch+ book.I hope you all enjoy my work and perhaps have a good laugh while doing so!

Hey, author here. So after releasing 100 chapters, I came to realise how far I’ve come in terms of my writing quality and pacing. I believe if you were to read chapter 1 to lets say chapter 40, it’s very different now but with that being said, I’m leaving my review on my novel. I will say that the first few chapters are slow but that’s because I’m introducing the world, their motivations, themes and characterisation. Layla came at chapter 1 but Emery and Zafira came later at chapter 3 or 4. Then atlas was around chapter 10+. It’s slow but I believe it’s worth it. Idk im my own biggest fan and critic. But thank you for reading The Broken Paths. I will do my best in writing and staying consistent.Also I will take any questions you have for me.

Loving the novel so far. It’s intriguing, funny, and action packed. I’m not huge on present tense narration, but that’s a personal preference and the story more than makes up for it. Also, crab is best girl, no arguing.

So far, so good, but the update is taking long.Also, when will we be able to vote with power stones

Good morning! I hope this message finds you well. I recently came across your story, and I have to say it’s truly admirable. Authors like you genuinely deserve recognition for your creativity and talent.I’m a commission based artist who collaborates with authors to transform their stories into comics. This approach not only brings stories to life visually but also helps them gain reach, popularity, and potentially generate income if published.I’d love to discuss the possibility of working together, as I’ve developed a script inspired by your story. If you’d like to check out my work, you can visit my profile, VanessaWick on DeviantArt. If this sounds interesting to you, feel free to reach out to me on Discord my username is losserishereLooking forward to hearing from you!

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its ur 2nd novel and i already loved it...keep it up....