It has great potential and everything in-between

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what i have to start unlocking chapters at chapter 8....what the heck....

I’ve read all the chapters so far and I could definetely say it’s addicting. The story is wonderful and Zeno’s journey and character is very interesting. I’ll follow this story and learn from it. Goodluck, Sandy!

Hello everyone!This is the author. This is my first novel, and I'm still learning so the quality in the first few chapters may not be the best but it is improving. If you notice any mistakes, plot holes, or areas for improvement, please let me know. I’m here to answer any questions about the story as well.  Your reviews and ideas are appreciated.

this story is an enthralling exploration of betrayal from a close friend and a loved one. From the very first page, I was drawn into a world that felt both familiar and utterly unique. I highly recommend

Congratulations to our dear Author, Hansora, for the new book! Wish you win the WSA 2025! ✧｡٩(ˊᗜˋ )و✧*｡Now, time for the review.Although I only read 10 chapters, the story pacing was well-written and the character settings were well-done. I read the chapter slowly and yet I fell that it was too short. I need more chapters! (,,>﹏<,,)While the plot starts with a cliche, the smooth narration makes the story flow naturally and lets me immerse in the situation faced by the character. The story has a lot of potential and I can't wait to see how Lari face-slaps the Green Tea fake daughter and makes her parents and brothers regret what they did. And of course, I'm ready to have a toothache from our couple's 'dog food'. (⸝⸝ᵕᴗᵕ⸝⸝)Keep up the good work and best of luck, Author! ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧

The rewritten version of this book feels like a completely different story compared to the original chapters. While the first draft had its charm, the new version introduces an air of mystery that pulls you in. The slow, steady unraveling of the plot keeps you engaged, making the journey to piece it all together far more rewarding. It’s a bold reimagining that feels fresh and intriguing.

This story is beautiful. Everything is amazing in the story have very little criticism about this novel. I have a question to the author are you gonna payroll and padlock the chapters? Please don’t

what can say.... If you love Soulsborne, and high octane action with steady character development... That is far different from other extra stories out they.. Then this is the book is for you.....I highly recommend it... 100/10

Details are okay and intriguing. Typos are there and it’s inevitable

Really I wanna have a writing skills like yours