GinMado - Love Can Hurt

Ill give 5/5 since its a kingdom builder. Now for the actual review ....First off even though ima complain mostly its because its good enough to complain about and I like the story. Anyways my biggest issue with the story is the pacing and YES I know the first 200 or so chapters is set-up so I wont mention them. But after Volume 1 its supposed to pick up, and maybe it does a little bit but the writing style makes it seem like it doesn't. ---Basically as a reader who is caught up, I have to wait 1 day for 1 chapter, and that isn't bad as that release rate is quite good. But the content in those chapters are not worth the day wait, so instead you feel disappointed when you look and buy a chapter that is about cutting hair ... thats it that was the ENTIRE chapter! In a kingdom builder that can easily span 1000s of chapters these small things like getting a haircut or finding bones of a dino should be small parts of the overall chapter. ----- What I'm saying is if I stopped reading for a year and came back I wouldn't have a problem because I could skip those chapters or read them and not feel scammed by it because there are hundreds of chapters to binge read. But that isn't the case, Instead I look forward to a chapter to release and it turns out to be a character who doesn't matter getting their haircut and their feelings about it.----- Anyways your book do what you want ill probably still read it even if I feel disappointed because  kingdom builders that are readable are RARE.

PLEASE I BEG YOU AUTHORRRR. DONT DROP THIS. THIS IS THE BESTTTTTTTPLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE....................................................................

If you want to read a book that constantly says “oh wow so strong” “how is that possible” “how did he do that” “can I be like that” then this book is for you this book sucks so bad

I read the first 40 chapters and it can be seen that the author is new to writing. There is nothing wrong with this but in the comments, the author tries to justify the inconsistencies in the novel with some bs reason and the readers seem to lap it up.This is probably due to the nature of such a book being ero. But sadly, the intimate scenes after the first left me feeling cringe or nothing at all.The author set out an enticing world I was will to read more of, but after these 40 chapters, I'm not very sure anymore.

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Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future

This book drew me in! I loved the explanation of the cultivation guidelines, very simple to follow. I love all the face slapping! I have read hundreds of thousands of books and I hope this author will continue to amuse a fan. I really enjoyed reading what was posted so far. I even used my coins to continue to read and I never do that, just usually use the fast pass. Great book so far, please don't drop!

The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me.I love reading it very much when I'm free.every story plot in all the chapter is great and good.I wish I could read it every day to fill my day.I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work.Thank you and don’t drop or reboot it because I like read your novel.