MAYA,my love

My personal in depth review, (SPOILERS AHEAD so read at your own Caution, TLDR below) TLDR: Please heed my advice and don't waste your time reading this novel, I know I regret these last few days. Where should I start. I read up to about 900 chapters and then spoiled myself a bit further on to confirm one of the reasons I dropped this novel. Before I begin, I would like to mention that I think the overall grammar and spelling throughout the novel had been really good and I didn't notice much mistakes or sentences that flowed weird and the world building was also pretty good and in depth of the various kingdoms and what not. However that's pretty much all this novel has to offer in my opinion. I wanted so desperately to like it, that I kept reading all the way up to 900 instead of dropping it earlier on like I wanted to. I'll list some of the moan things that personally really destroyed this novel for me. There's so much unnecessary garbage filler of side characters and mini arcs we just don't need. There just do happens to be another side character also from "earth" who already had his harem established before MC (lol), and then some random jojo memes thrown in which just threw off the pace. Wish Drake was never introduced anyways. Speaking of harem and r18 scenes in general, our mc doesn't start building until much deeper in the sorry which is fine I didn't mind the wait, that is until every other stupid side characters were given harems AND r18 scenes before the MV even got his first girl and even after the fact it is just absurd giving so much attention to these side characters when we are here for the MC. Examples: Drake Blackburn and his harem, Danius and his harem, Lucas and his harem, and so many other characters we (or at least I) don't care about at ALL. What was the final straw for me and really cause me to drop was around chapter 900 Logan fights Nora and of course they start to develop romantic feelings which I spoiled myself on (she is added to his harem). Imagine the whole reason they traveled to the Alstreim estate is to enact Claire's revenge on them and one of the main people behind her father's crippling and etc. Nora, who is then added to Claire's husband (Logan's) harem after they met for the first time and had a battle where he then "saves" her for some reason even though his supposedly love of his life hates her. Absolutely ridiculous, functionally makes  no sense, and the final straw. In my sincere opinion, I would recommend you all to stay away from this novel and most importantly do not waste your time. I spent a few days getting to chapter 900 and I deeply regret it, however thanks for the ride stardust_breaker, even as unenjoyable as it was I have no doubt you will gain more experience and write a better novel in the future.

the concept is good.but mc doesn't have a brain.mc doesn't act with logic.mc mentality is garbage.novel is like mtl novel.....................................

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i really love this history, need more please...............................................................................................................

The writing is good, updates come often and the background makes sense, although some stuff is hard to understand. What I dont like is firstly, the cliché of the arrogant young masters. I cant seem to escape it no matter what I do. Besides, Its not the Middle Ages anymore. They should be at least a little smart. Thats probably the main reason I left this book. Whenever there are young masters involved, the clichés follow.

Not have read yet.  But synopsis is cool.  I'll change it depending after I read the chapter .                              V.

So for starters theres no real description of the world just that its a "cultivator world" pretty much all the info you get, i always give new books i try about 25 - 50 chapters before i trully drop them but i couldnt even make it to 25. dropped at 20, MC is Beyond beta its pretty sad i understand not have experience with women but this is beyond that by a lot, it feels more like this is a 13 yr old boy going thru puberty. You had a good idea coming in but ruined it by how your mc is. and technically if he has maxed out mental fortification he shouldn't react like a 13yr old when the dumb cliché things happen. conclusion do not read if you hate Beta MC's read if you enjoy reading about Beta Mc's.

needs improvement to the story . or the translation is not right.