MAYA,my love

Just caught up with this came here from your other work because I enjoyed your writing style and heck i wasn't disappointed. I'll be in tune to see how this goes please see it through. Also I know Maya is a bit silly but please give her a second chance before things get too far, also Vincent needs to die in the worst possible way, he always manages to annoy me every chapter. All in all you are doing a great job on all characters so far they are all well fleshed out, great job on your stream reactions too they're always fresh. Anyways without me ranting too much just don't drop this, it might be getting low tractions now but I believe with more chapters many will come to appreciate this masterpiece.

Ridiculous. Just read it, if you’re monster evo fan like me, it has mutation system in it, so we have good food coming. Lore and world building is even more crazier though. Author please just write, stop living and write more chapters for me or maybe I consider options you don’t really like!

You'll never know if you don't go (go!)

You'll never shine if you don't glow

Marco and Thatch who have been staring weirdly at the boy, turn to stare at Ace.

As I pushed open the exit door I heard behind me a loud shout " KILL THEM ALL!!".

needs improvement to the story . or the translation is not right.

So for starters theres no real description of the world just that its a "cultivator world" pretty much all the info you get, i always give new books i try about 25 - 50 chapters before i trully drop them but i couldnt even make it to 25. dropped at 20, MC is Beyond beta its pretty sad i understand not have experience with women but this is beyond that by a lot, it feels more like this is a 13 yr old boy going thru puberty. You had a good idea coming in but ruined it by how your mc is. and technically if he has maxed out mental fortification he shouldn't react like a 13yr old when the dumb cliché things happen. conclusion do not read if you hate Beta MC's read if you enjoy reading about Beta Mc's.