Hiraeth: Twin Curse

interesting story and great storyline. a combination of humour and a little drama, romance, and goodness the intimacy between Matt and Riona is so hot. Plus Victor's appearance. can not wait for the author to finish this book. well done to you writer!♡

I really quite like this novel. It doesn't take itself entirely seriously, and the system he has allows for the author to get him into contrived and funny scenes that bely common sense (because the system has none). So far it's developed quite well, and fleshes out the world background so that you have a good picture of the past, present, and a hazy view of the future. It's fairly exciting, with battle-scenes that aren't just "He punched him, he fell over" sort of style, and has a decent dialogue along with extreme characters with interesting behaviours and viewpoints.

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Good start, the update pace is good. The system seems to be a little arrogant, MC seems to be a over achieving Joe undeserving of the system like the otaku MC's.

The narrative is well crafted, although it leaves the reader with much to imagine. The characters however, despite being fictional displays real emotions. The story so far is serious minded and intellectual.its a good work. Few punctuation errors and fewer dialogues. I look forward to more chapters.

ManEaterThis is one of the best series I have ever read. And I have read a lot good series, chinese, japanese, korean etc. I believe that everyone that reads this will have bad points about this story, but if you look past the one or two bad parts, this is a great series, I would definently continue reading it.

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I knocked him out once thought about using him as a subject of experimentation or making him a subject.