The first chapter set up the tone pretty well, it was pretty serious and the mc isn't foiling around, he reminds me a bit of Gilgamesh from fate.The writing is also pretty neat and the use of fancier words have been used here and there, so far have potential and I cant wait to see more.

Good writing! I like the sibling bonding. It felt so natural. First 3 chapters are well developed. Gonna continue reading…

way to early to give a more solid review but the pacing and story progression is rather fun. I would like to see our protagonist get a better grasp of the world going forward. review at chapter 10.

when will you upload the next chapter...

I really enjoy being able to read this story! It made me laugh hearing the Mc’s character!

at first glance the cover kinda reminds me of song of achilles, historical yaoi gimme also, i'd love to discuss more about your book, is there contacts (ig, email, or discord) i could follow? xx

I'm here to give myself a pat on the back because, honestly, this story has been living rent-free in my head for the longest time.I kept telling myself, "I'll start tomorrow," but tomorrow turned into weeks, then months. Procrastination had me in a tight grip, but I finally decided—enough is enough. It was time to bring Sumaya and Marrok’s journey to life, and I couldn’t be happier that I took that step.To every reader who took the time to check out this novel, thank you so much from the bottom of my heart.Your support means everything, and I truly hope you’ll stick around until the very end of Sumaya and Marrok’s journey. There’s so much more to come, and I can’t wait to share it all with you!

J'adore la construction du monde et le style d'écriture.

I have only read small and I already love it and after am done writing this review I will read more. Good book

HOW IS THIS NOVEL NOT MAKING WAVES ?!!!!It's amazing...

I don't believe that i have to say anything except that it's a fun and great read, i had a smile the whole time.

Everything W nice Keep it up and nice poetry