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Li2O
- Joined
- July 1,2024
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saw this on tiktok so I created an account to start reading it, insanely good so far would recommend. the update schedule is amazing, i'd definitely try it out for yourself tbhthe writing is also pretty good, ive notice no errors grammatically or anything
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what season is the mc in and are there gonna be real players in the future. other than that its a good novel up to now
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love it. Such a start.Fl is also bold. i quite like it.
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First few chapters are okay. Writing is a bit muddled, switching between 1st 2nd and 3rd person. In later chapters, writing gets worse, and the author literally copy-pastes entire paragraphs to pad space. Do not read this story.
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eegh the story in the begining was okey try to write more without AIThis aint good man you have bright ideas but you should take the time to write
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Read up to Chapter 18 and this shit has a lot of potential. I've read a fuck ton of "Extra" novels and tho this ain't the best (TNE and Reborn as an Extra exists) it is still a solid read. The updating stability is also good with at least 1 chapter per day. His "Bloodline of Sacrifice" is also interesting and I don't think I've ever seen anything like it before (maybe I have but forgot, who knows?). Anyways lance don't you dare lock this shit at chapter 20 or some shit {be more like pancakes and just don't lock it :D}
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Overall really like the story and am excited to see where it’s going in the future. The start was a bit generic as most story’s featuring transmigrator’s that inhabit extra bodies. What makes this more interesting is that instead of having everything immediately known to the protagonist things are changing in minor to major ways that keeps it from feeling bare bones and unfeeling Simply put it makes the world feel more alive then what many story’s in the genre do.The side characters are somewhat lacking but in the grand scheme of things it’s still early and has a chance to branch out and explore the characters more. from what I’ve seen I have faith in the author to do so as the seeds have already been planted within the story even now.I don’t know if it will be for everyone but I’ve really liked it. Thanks for the read author I hope to enjoy more in the future!
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Author I have a question... insest i know will happen...but in the discription I mean In synopsis there is [slaves] tag...so will Mc also have his slaves?
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the writing is really beautiful. i knew that Hades was definitely going to be the groom when Priscilla came in angry like that. I would love to find out what happened to the real Aurora
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Not sure there’s much more to say with the other well-written reviews here….Read the book - you’ll enjoy it.But be forewarned - it does suck you in!
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One of the best novels I have ever read,keep it up 😌.We need more of thsi.Thank you very much,really appreciate it.You have done a great job 👏,if you keep am thsi good work.I assure you you’re on the right path to success
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nice book. keep it up, very interesting love
Ethereal