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Intriguing

I am not able to understand what the author is trying to achieve. sometimes the story feels like being written by two different people.

Needs a rewrite... the grammar is so bad it's practically unreadable...

if you like library of heaven's path, history's number 1 founder and absolute great teacher then you'll love this. word count word count word count word count word count word count word count

.............................its a good novel...... just increase the no of chapter.........................................  you release every month

Such a Epic Story with realism. can't believe. this is so compelling. enjoyable!! too long to read 😂. are more chapters are coming to this Epic??!

The story is fascinating and the fact that it is the author's first system story, the author did a pretty good and I enjoyed reading the book. Will be looking forward to more from you.

While I am a fan of the story and the author, the editing team seriously dropped the ball on this one.  Consistently misspelling Mag-lev as meg-lev, misused words and blatant wrong words show that the editing team generally skimmed through with a spell-checker and did not check the grammar or word context.  After that, they did not even read through their own work before posting their mess.  The worst offense was in chapter 79, where they were retarded enough to not only screw up the same word three times on one page, they also ****ed up the spelling of the main character's name.  THIS IS INEXCUSABLE.I'm done with reading this ****, might come back to it if they ever fix it.  I don't like having to stop reading every other page on average to make a corrective notation.  I realize that this is a completed book and is not currently being maintained.  I wish to state that it is a terrible idea to leave it this way, when it could be made so much better with a little time and a good quality editor.