Very good starting! Good world building, easy to understand and follow, I like the kind of magic they use. Good characters, hoping to see more of them and what the development would be! I am really enjoying reading it! I can't wait to read more of it!

keep it more beautiful . nice story in begining6

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Found my cup of tea, literally.... every side character in this novel love tea😭. Welp this novel had been a great read, especially how fricken funny how the mc fumbles everything in his favor which is may or may not be good for his mental health 🤣. There's some minor issues but good thing the author listens properly and fixed his mistakes and improved on the ongoing chapter.

So far it's an interesting story and it's giving the mysterious and sexy vibes🌚 can't wait for the updates☺️. Good job author🖤

Love the work keep it up. However I think you could have better and more in depth fight scenes. I also believe giving Arthur his own gift is a good idea ( only a recommendation ). Hope you keep updating tho top quality up to 201 chapters

Pretty great novel. It has a good future.

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

I don't know why bro is even getting stronger! but let it come!!!. maybe the fighting scenes could use improved writing, I see lots of 'and then-', just my opinion, no hate.

It is very good and has great potential and I am excited to see where this story goes.

Este es una novela de origen brutal xd..

5 for encouragement. I hope there won’t be any AI or dragged out smut, and hopefully it will be like the previous one heheh