I haven't read the book yet but I have my faith on the Author of Void System 😎📖🍻So I will give All Five Stars for You before I even read a single chapter yet😇🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟😁

this novel has an interesting concept and great depth. the story feels like of a methodology and it is rare to seem stories like this which is good.whe I read athaven I remembered a noevk which I read before but u paused it at about 700 chap. it talked about all heaven battle field. and it's a trilogy. I recommend u to read it. it is not soo similar but was a good read like your.

amnse is fab fr...characters,drama,plot,twists all of them are so good! btw is this book ongoing or completed???

Amazing start! The plot's got me hooked, and I'm loving the characters. Huge potential here! Can't wait to see where the story goes from here. You're a talented writer - keep shining!

wow it's beautiful beginning, the synopsis it's great, i can't wait to the next chapter

Well, Google translation with editing, English language from the series,😅 so the novel’s grade is lowered a little🥲. I try as much as possible to amend it after translation. If you happen to find an error,😘 please inform me and I will try to amend it. If the novel is good and I can make money from it🥴, I will have a professional translator do the translation😋. Finally, I want to say, with your support, I gain confidence in producing a better story.❤️

A swift romance novel here. The characters are fleshed out properly and the story has a great sense of hooking there.  I love it. It is a great piece of art.

I like the genre of VRMMO very much . This one looks promising also. JALLEN, I am a newbie author . Can you give me some guidance for improvement in writing or how to attract readers ? If you want , you can comment via a different account. I just need an opinion of an experienced author.🙂

it’s just to much unnecessary suffer without any cause for it i kinda just checked out he just getting torturing for no reason it’s been happening since the novel began like the one lady slap him twice to get answers out of him it was just ridiculous

honestly I'm enjoying the story if you want something to read for relaxation this is the one I just want to see how it goes and I hope the mc doesn't become dumb

Hi I'm the writer and I think I could still use a ton of work to make this dream of becoming a writer come true so please leave an honest review for me so I can make this better!

not your typical system novel 15 episodes so far keep it uplooks like a webtoon kind of fiction