Heaven Has Fallen (BL)

This girl/guy (Idk which) is like my favorite auther they wrote dreadful radio show which is one of my top 3 books of all time you never know what's gonna happen next a guy who seems crazy is normal a normal guy is a ghost a guy who's a ghost is alive it never stops

Horrible to read, right off at the start we have a idiotic butler, then this MC who believes living prosperous is a form of revenge, the author takes away all forms of getting strong and leaves the MC an ordinary person, who can and honestly should be just killed off.

I love the character development, grammar, and spelling. I also love the fact that shin is a healer but am disappointed that he is slowly transforming into a cliche mc who is either a dual class or abandoning his healing for high combat power. Please understand, combat power isn't everything. I love shins uniqueness and that would disappear real fast if he continues this path. Every other wuxia novel has high combat power mcs, and they all become gods at the end. This novel has a chance to explore the political and social impacts of shin being a PURE healer, exploring the healing arts in greater depth and detail, as well as increasing its popularity by becoming a non cliche novel unlike every other novel. I admire your writing style, and if you are reading this I would like to tell you that your work is the best out of all the original novels I have read. Please don't let Shin's uniqueness disappear. It is the thing which sets him apart from other mc's who are all combat power hungry. let him become a pioneer, and make him a healer.

here and I give review better compare to 1 star and this is the real review. this story is bad after reading into 1st chapter. the one thing I hate about mc is her personality. even though I read at 1wt chapter I know where the story will went well. Just read at first chapter. And the world background is quite bad because the author did Chinese novel and Korean novel a cultivation world with technology and a tower! it's exactly what you think so yeah..

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This story has great content and the MC is one of a kind and unique, at least he expresses the usual emotions one should expect of his age without being overly domineering or timid. I commend the author and wish he could do quick uploads till we fast-forward into his sect

This novel is well-written thus far, and I think it has potential to become a good novel to read. From the first 24 chapters, the novel's strongest aspect is the quality of the writing and the balancing of the characters. I feel like the achievements of each character is realistic with the setting, though the value of the currency is unclear and I do question how realistic buying a high-end vr machine is with the wage of a convenience store worker. Going into the future, I think that, so long as it continues with this level of quality and power scaling, this will become one of the better vr novels, however, if the power scaling isn't done well, it'll be a generic novel that doesn't stand out. I'd also like a bit more world building, but it's not urgent, since it's not a main focus of the novel.

This is by far the best book I have found on this platform, especially with character development, and its just starting too! I'm still waiting to see more of the world structure i am soooooo excited!!!!