@Aechauhan, one thing I would like to mention, it's likely that this story is going to be viral, but you are capable enough to do so, for me, the story is going out well, and as Ms. Kannojia mentioned, English could be enhanced, and the story could be more lively, all the way it's good but still it can be more hooking than it currently is.

Very good novel, I find the concept interesting. However, it seems strange that no one becomes suspicious after winning every bet and generating over 300 million pounds.The only downside is the number of chapters—I started reading without checking the count, and when I finished, I thought, "Where are my other 300 chapters?"

Author here, still new to the whole web novel writing space, feedbacks would be highly appreciated.And of course I'm going to rate it 5 stars cause why not 😂

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ah this is soo fun. I wish the author would continue updating. it is light hearted and funny. there is room for improvement♡ very recommended.

A great book. Love the creation and the places. WHat will happen to "The Wanderer"? I am very curious about. The characters are captivating and engaging.

I like this novel because of the character and brutality of the mc The upgrades in power and the power system is quite interesting as well

I really like the novel overall, but man you gotta work on your writing skill.I know this is your first book, but yeah its pretty decent and worth a read because of its uniqueness.xD

It’s gooooooodSome parts of the translation are shaky but it’s free, so get over that. When it says government, read mistress. There’s drama, mystery, weak to strong FL. Overall strong female characters. The villains are complex and at times things a very grey (which I love). AND it not unnecessarily long.

Hey guys a lovely upcoming book this is right, I would really appreciate it if you can comment and give me feedback for better development 😁. Support would be nice to rating it so, thanks guys 🙂.

I am confused if this is fantasy or fantasy romance? From how I see it the demon king is man, I even thought Olivia was the Mc at one point.The author has found her own way of pacing sentences, and it's relatively good, what's left is to fix a few grammatical errors

Definitely a villain mc alright , dont really have any complaints , a very nice story you might wanna start increasing your production rate or else