He is Mine - Saving my Alpha

Just the first few chapters and I am loving this novel ☺️. The storyline is intriguing. The diction on point.I recommend this novel to anyone who loves a good fantasy novel well spiced.

I think the first guy was wrong this isn't like RSSG its more of a cross-over between RSSG and A New World. Has an MC that uses knowledge of the pass to get ahead of everyone else (check), uses that same knowledge to get legendary class, weapon, and armor when first logging in (check), Uses knowledge to setup up a guild building, hire craftsman, create guild, to not only farm karma but to get further ahead; stating later that the guild building will be useless later on (check).This isn't like A New World where it takes 100 chapters to get to the next day because the author over explains everything to even what type of dust is on the ground. But at the same time, this novel doesn't really say a whole lot either, at least so far...I try to read the first 50 chapters before leaving a review, more so if I want to see how things play out or if I can't make up my mind; for example what I did for "Bloodline system" I read till chapter 500 before I left a review". But, I've read up until chapter 60, and really reading this is equivalent to "I did this in game, then this, then this, and this happen, then I did this, and this, and this, and look I'm so lucky...btw my world is on the brink of destruction, with pullulated air, barren fields & crops, zombie's, massive radiation, etc...but hey we're fine now because I moved us to a better location, so we can play this game that the government is forcing down our throats"...and then I did this, and this, and this,.....haaa it makes no sense lolFor those reasons I rated this as a 2.8. It's not bad but, story wise it doesn't make sense why; if his world was full of such destruction the government would force everyone to play a game; when their REAL bodies would still be in a fallen world....

Why do you vote for these trash novels? This is a (bad) novel site, not a fan-fic filled forum/chan. If I wanted to see fan-fic I would go to anywhere else where those are free and a plenty.

Decent novel, Everyone makes it out to be a masterpiece but it's really not. There are grammar problems. The development is slow for my taste.Not much character design you don't know a lot about the character.Not much of any World background. You should work on grammar and the characters a lot more if you want to improve.

Hey author!!Really glad to read your story and shocked that a young author come up with such a brillant idea of writing and expressing thoughts to words...i just read your chapter and each one gave me eager to read another one...every character you just plotted in this story just polished your thinking and writing skills to another level..Really glad that young authors like you growing very well ..Just liked your character samuel the way you just plotted him as a naughty one you made such a entertaining character.. even with the harry just give the vibe of seriousness...But overall all the very best for your upcoming chapters...You are really such a good entertainer

It seems to be going well so far, an interesting yet also confusing plot. The setting doesn't make sense to me, schools attacking each other in a clan war is unique but strange as well. I'm sure more will be explained in future chapters

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