User
HomieLv1
- Joined
- July 1,2024
- Reviews
- 320
...
Show More
While reading the first chapter, I perceived the MC as a mischievous spoilt brat, but as I read on, I realized heβs actually sensible and mature for his age which is understandable due to his background.The story progresses quickly, and I was caught off guard by the sudden shift from the third-person narrative to first-person narrative in chapter 4, but I guess that works as well. Overall, the story is very good, and would have readers like me invested in it. Good job, author π
...
Show More
I like it! The action scenes are amazing and the story building is great. It has potential
...
Show More
The writer has done a very great job.. im really loving this so much! im addicted!!
...
Show More
Hey Author, what did you decide for the mother? πI have a GREAT SUGGESTION, πJust make the mc's mother virgin, now there is a question of how she gave birth. Just say the mc's father has a physique which can't get close to women, which was solved after the mc birth after the father improved his cultivation(or not solved if you want).So the mc's mother took three fruits to give birth to the three children(or smth like that)πI'm sure everyone will be satisfied with it.π€€If you have have already added the mother to the harem, Then PLEASE change the mother character setting when she was introduced.And, if you have not, then please change the character setting and add her to the harem.EVERYONE WILL LOVE THIS SETTING (I think)ππLastly, I LOVE this work of yours. Hope you consider my suggestion.
...
Show More
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
...
Show More
Its a good story in si fi, the character Veer is a awesome boy, who gradually improve and make sutable in the planet titan.Its a good story in si fi, the character Veer is a awesome boy, who gradually improve and make sutable in the planet titan.
...
Show More
Story procession is good. lets start and see how good it is??
...
Show More
i enjoyed the book very much, author has great sense of humor.I want to reed more chapters.
...
Show More
The concept is really intriguing, and Iβm excited to see where the story goes next! Canβt wait for more chapters to unfold.
...
Show More
First time Iβve been attracted and attarched to a novel as such. Everything is on point for me but the only problem is the words and vocabulary.Please come down to my level
...
Show More
Aiden's journey to an exciting new level, blending intrigue with intense character development. As Aiden delves deeper into the Code Guild, his growing powers and the mysterious book heβs connected to slowly start making sense, revealing his role as a Code Conduit. The introduction of Master Lin as a mentor, the hints at the dangerous Nullifiers, and the arrival of Maya, who shares a unique connection to the code, build a strong foundation for whatβs to come. The mix of thrilling world-building, Aidenβs intense training, and the revelation of the Etheric Assembly sets the stage for even greater challenges and discoveries ahead, leaving readers eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
...
Show More
"Solo Assassin" is a gripping read with paced action and a MC you canβt help but root forβIβm hooked and excited to see where the story goes next!
Transcendent Gene