From fan to forever

This novel is kinda like Mediterranean hegemon of Ancient Greece. Even the start is the same except for the weird romance. If I recall the reason I dropped this was because of the romance. All in all nothing in the novel really made me keep reading. For example the Mc, side characters, Fl, the world. But that’s just me I’m sure others enjoy this.

The story starts off talking about how they need to wait for traders to get things going. This was within the first 5 chapters. 170 chapters later and we still haven't seen the traders. If you don't know what this entails then ill tell you. The author is dragging on the story for coins.

Hi author here, I’m just going to shamelessly give myself a great review. Not because I think the two chapters that are out are in anyway perfect, but because I believe the future of this novel will be amazing.

Either select the book, or deliver the raws, it's all in deal, just do it fast.                                                           .

Your story premise is fine, world building and character development are okay except the main character. For someone who is super smart and a doctor he acts like a f*cking moron. I get his desire to be doctor n such but he doesn't seem to be adapting or more like he is deluding himself and be willfully ignorant, it makes it hard to read the story. And what happened in the cube with the girl, the cube gave him info about what he could do to d girl n d potential negative effects 4 her and being a doctor he still couldn't get himself under control... I mean seriously?! With all d harping he's done about his dream of being a doctor n d reason he gave why, one would think he would have more self control...smh.Anyways good story but cos of d mc I doubt I'll be able to continue reading

COME BACK PLS ! THIS NOVEL IS A WAY TO GOOD TO BE DROPPED 😭😭😭

Jack and his system is what could be categorized as an old and ancient cinnamon buns. There is only a few chapters as of current but I think it deserves some credit for writing a unique story in its genre.The mc is wise and knowledgeable and it's interesting to have a person with the mind of a veteran appeared to act realistically because of the culture shock and not just a plain one dimensional character. Although as of current the mc doesn't have a clear goal other than trying to survive with bruises and weak body(it's still around 12 chapter this review got written). It serve as a foundation of power development where Jack Armstrong could rise and be at his prime again.The system have a lot of potential with how it's displayed. It's like an rng autogrowth in a roguelite, affected by many factor like environment, trait, aggressiveness, where the tentacle is given a random perk everytime its Mutagen has successfully created a mutated ability.There is only few legit fighting action but that alone shows that the mc knows what he was doing although nervous because of the different logic in this world. So if you want some good action with reasonable mc, this book is for you.Still fresh but there is no sign of murkiness, it's going to get clearer and clearer as the time goes on. Because there is not a single info dump given and that's good.5/5, reccomended and still waiting for chapter

A good novel, but the free chapters are few, so it only deserves one starA good novel, but the free chapters are few, so it only deserves one star