From fan to forever

A unique blend of mystery and romance. The characters’ chemistry was electric, but the plot occasionally felt too predictable. Still, a solid read

The start of the novel is pretty confusing and a little hard to undersatnd but after a while things seem to become more clear, but that all i can say since there are only 3 chapter and i will come back when there are 20 or more chapter

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It’s my first experience with a  gacha system mechanic in a story and I wasn’t sure about it. But what pulls me in is the character development. The characters are interesting and I learn more about them as we go along and as the protagonist grows. The first Lord battles were very satisfying: it was close; surprises on the enemy side kept it exciting as the mc didn’t just easily overpower.

The Prince ordered them to spread out, while maintaining a loose formation. All wearing their visors, able to pick up any signs of life-forms within a few hundred meters, they were approaching the place steadily yet surely. Weapons, both ranged and melee, were readied for action. Gael led the whole recon team up front. As the team proceeded forward, so did Aelthred's squad behind them, ready to give them a covering fire. There were two tech-warriors positioned at the rear, a pair of seasoned veterans, in case where their siblings-in-arms would need an immediate extraction.

Koro turned to her and almost swallowed her whole as he gave her the weapon she chose. As he removed himself from her Seryu form could be seen again.

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A realistic story with heavy themes like bullying, depression, loneliness, insecurity, love, hatred... And just so much more to come... A story like that? You have all of my support - if executed properly.The first 4 chapters are magnificently written, albeit with a few minor errors here and there. The story looks really promising considering the title of the story. It states that the story is inspired by the author's real life. That would allow the author to give a moral message to their readers. I hope they succeed in whatever message they're trying to send.All the best! I'll write more reviews as the story progresses. Also, I really love and hate cliffhangers, really just makes me wanna read all.