It's intriguing I was drawn here from the synposis looking forward to transition from modern to fanstasy and I really caught off guard from shift of mls pov I thought he was naughty kid background story running is heart wrenching

i will be publishing this fast multiple chapters a day till 1000 chapters this is my honest rating on this story if you find an error in translation or anything wrong point it out i will correct it

ahh I am soo excited!enemies to lovers?this webnoevl soo intruding pushing me on edge. I really want the author to upadte fast.

you gotta continue this fic it's one of the best ones about Hip Hop on here and there so many ways you can take it like Pac starting a Record label with talents in different genres and not just a rap label, the movie business beef with the gov and Diddy I can't wait to see what you do

I like the naruto elements in the story, you could even include the tailed beast  modes later in the story.Also maybe a little hint on what is ahead since it s too safe right now.Keep up the good work !

a great story this novel has some potential

thanks to the author for writing an excellent work. i love the novel,Lily is a kind, intelligent and brave girl.I can see my own shadow in her. At all times, I want to be a little nicer to others, but as a result, I am taken advantage of. we must have one's own opinions.

I love how you construct your words hoping to read more of this. Please post more the plot looks great and interesting. I am thrilled how they will be able to find samantha

Good writing: characters written with their own personality, plot keeps readers engaged Troph feels a little cliché

This novel takes an interesting start and quickly plunges the MC into a new world where he has so much to learn. The MC is strong, funny, and smug, which makes him a joy to read.One note of improvement would be the overall writing quality. The writing is good, however, it can be polished so that it reads perfectly.

Okay, I like it now that the mc personality is changing

Good story, I enjoyed reading, everything is on point and the way story it’s flowing is amazing the beginning alone it awesome and well lined it I’m looking forward for more I hope it’ll not get axed