It's so interesting how I got hooked on this novel so quickly I mean... carso was really amazing and overall I give it four stars but to support the author because he's new I'll give it five stars

It’s really good and if you keep up a fast paced story I see potential

Just read up to the latest chapter. This is a heck of a new book, love the story development and main character. Fir me. the only problem is how the author tries to use big words a lot which can prove somewhat confusing, as we might not understand them. Good book, regardless.

I actually read a short one and read a lot in a short amount of time. I don't know how everyone feels about it, but I liked it so I came here to write.Good, not bad.. give it a try ☺️

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The story is alright, but there are a few things that caused the lower score.  First, the inconsistencies with Character names.  There have been several times where the Name Melissa takes over a character like a virus, and it's rather irritating when it happens.Next is the strangely disjointed feeling timeline.  There are several instances where it seems that only hours have passed yet at the same time feels like weeks have.  It can be hard to keep track of exactly how long has passed.Third issue I would point out is how Shallow character interaction and relationships appear to be.  Some characters play a role and then seemingly vanish never to be heard from again.  Overall, it's an OK read so far but it's not a story I can rate highly.  Good concept, ok execution.  There just isn't enough refinement, consistency, or depth to rate it higher.

I love the character buildup, and would easily recommend it to readers

Well, the story is a good one, looking forward to reading more chapters. I highly recommend.

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It might be good but the references are annoying

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