Forever Entwined: A Love Beyond Time

This is great but please use grammar properly instead of they, them and other pronouns to not be gender specific just use the mc's name because Blake is no longer a human with a gender and when using pronouns improperly like using the words they and them use the name because they and them is plural and means a group or a pair of people

to read this you have to have a slight degree of masochism or turn off the brainIf you try to take the story the least bit seriously, you will hate yourself.

Tʜᴀɴᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀ𝕿𝖍𝖆𝖓𝖐𝖘 𝖋𝖔𝖗 𝖙𝖍𝖊 𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖕𝖙𝖊𝖗🆃🅷🅰🅽🅺🆂 🅵🅾🆁 🆃🅷🅴 🅲🅷🅰🅿🆃🅴🆁 😊🇹​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇦​​​​​🇳​​​​​🇰​​​​​🇸​​​​​ °🇫​​​​​🇴​​​​​🇷​​​​​° 🇹​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇪​​​​​ °🇨​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇦​​​​​🇵​​​​​🇹​​​​​🇪​​​​​🇷​​​​​🆃🅷🅰🅽🅺🆂 🅵🅾🆁 🆃🅷🅴 🅲🅷🅰🅿🆃🅴🆁 😊🇹​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇦​​​​​🇳​​​​​🇰​​​​​🇸​​​​​ °🇫​​​​​🇴​​​​​🇷​​​​​° 🇹​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇪​​​​​ °🇨​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇦​​​​​🇵​​​​​🇹​​​​​🇪​​​​​🇷​​​​​𝕿𝖍𝖆𝖓𝖐𝖘 𝖋𝖔𝖗 𝖙𝖍𝖊 𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖕𝖙𝖊𝖗Tʜᴀɴᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀ🇹​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇦​​​​​🇳​​​​​🇰​​​​​🇸​​​​​ °🇫​​​​​🇴​​​​​🇷​​​​​° 🇹​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇪​​​​​ °🇨​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇦​​​​​🇵​​​​​🇹​​​​​🇪​​​​​🇷​​​​​𝕿𝖍𝖆𝖓𝖐𝖘 𝖋𝖔𝖗 𝖙𝖍𝖊 𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖕𝖙𝖊𝖗🆃🅷🅰🅽🅺🆂 🅵🅾🆁 🆃🅷🅴 🅲🅷🅰🅿🆃🅴🆁 😊Tʜᴀɴᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀTʜᴀɴᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀ𝕿𝖍𝖆𝖓𝖐𝖘 𝖋𝖔𝖗 𝖙𝖍𝖊 𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖕𝖙𝖊𝖗🇹​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇦​​​​​🇳​​​​​🇰​​​​​🇸​​​​​ °🇫​​​​​🇴​​​​​🇷​​​​​° 🇹​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇪​​​​​ °🇨​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇦​​​​​🇵​​​​​🇹​​​​​🇪​​​​​🇷​​​​​🆃🅷🅰🅽🅺🆂 🅵🅾🆁 🆃🅷🅴 🅲🅷🅰🅿🆃🅴🆁 😊🇹​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇦​​​​​🇳​​​​​🇰​​​​​🇸​​​​​ °🇫​​​​​🇴​​​​​🇷​​​​​° 🇹​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇪​​​​​ °🇨​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇦​​​​​🇵​​​​​🇹​​​​​🇪​​​​​🇷​​​​​𝕿𝖍𝖆𝖓𝖐𝖘 𝖋𝖔𝖗 𝖙𝖍𝖊 𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖕𝖙𝖊𝖗Tʜᴀɴᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀ🆃🅷🅰🅽🅺🆂 🅵🅾🆁 🆃🅷🅴 🅲🅷🅰🅿🆃🅴🆁 😊🇹​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇦​​​​​🇳​​​​​🇰​​​​​🇸​​​​​ °🇫​​​​​🇴​​​​​🇷​​​​​° 🇹​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇪​​​​​ °🇨​​​​​🇭​​​​​🇦​​​​​🇵​​​​​🇹​​​​​🇪​​​​​🇷​​​​​

Very interesting plot and already has some good twists. Can't wait for the rest of it. Had me reading 3 in the morning. Translation isn't that bad just has a few errors that are easy to see and fix. I don't feel like their is much room for character development as the protagonist seems set in his ways, however their is still a lot that we can find out about the character. Cant wait to see how this story developed.

Haven't read but the synopsis is intriguing but is the summoner really a woman? Not really against it but based on the type of stories I've seen and the fact this is Chinese the woman might turn into the love interest real quick who the protagonist simps so much I hope my assumptions are incorrect though and that this would turn out quite good

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the title of the book is so mesmerizing I like it hope I read to my heart content ❤️❤️❤️❤️

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