It has a great start. Good job. You did well in making this novel.

I love this and I love those moments when he is scared

Whoa! Death. I love this story- just my type. Thank you Yama-2. Will Farci kill Death someday?

it's going to be one of the greatest novels

please how did you find the first 2 chapter?

Hey great author Have read your book and it's really amazing but I would like to share you some tips on how to grow your book performance

You know what, this is kind of good. I like the fluid writing, and world building. It feels slow and deliberate. I would recommend this novel to fantasy readers.

~30~ Chapters review. Why should you start reading this book? Because it's great of course! More seriously, I've read the other books of our dear author, but this one is the best.

All in all, this novel is a nice read. You can tell that the author is just getting his bearings in the professional writing world, as there are some grammar and spelling issues.But mostly, it's just forgetting to pluralise words and sometimes a word will be missing the last letter, but you can still make sense of what they're trying to say.It's a typical reincarnation story featuring Arthur Grimwood, a boy of humble origins who got a second chance at life after leading a pretty miserable existence before his death.I've read several system novels and written one myself, so I understand them quite well, and Su5h1 has made a system that holds both more and less information than the usual one, including things that are possible to achieve, yet not attained.There are just a couple of gaps in realism which cause you to make a double-take.There were only eight chapters when writing this review, but I think you should give it a chance and keep an eye on the author and their future works as well, because they may achieve great things!

Beautiful and nice characters, I can’t wait for Chris’s happy ending

A story with an enigmatic and impressive plot

I want this person to keep going with this, there is definitely an audience for it. Nothing more, just encouragement. Thank you for sharing your art with us.