I can only give this a solid 5/5 for a few reasons: The story itself is great. Well written chapters, vivid desciptions, and great world building. But one thing that is a big letdown is pacing. The chapters are too long, and the author tends to over explain. It's not a bad thing. It's great, but it does not work on this platform. Yet I hope this story goes far! I'm excited to read this to the end!

This is a fun read so far. I'll get back to it when I have the coins to spare. The MC make decent choices and the family seems like an excellent group, no rivalry the gets boring. Character growth is don't well and the mystery is engaging.

One of the best novels where the protagonist is a villain. Unlike most of this type in the app, MC is a true villain who doesn't care about anything or anyone, isn't stupid, and has an excellent understanding of human nature. The story is interesting and intriguing, and the supporting characters are good enough to keep you from getting bored when there's no MC POV. My favorite dynamic is the one between MC and Aristoria, although I will always say that a true villain doesn't have lovers or emotional relationships/friendships.

This is my very first book, and I’ve poured my heart and soul into it, striving to make it as captivating and enjoyable as possible. Writing this story has been a thrilling journey, and I’m excited to share it with you all. Your support means the world to me, and I truly hope you enjoy reading it as much as I’ve enjoyed creating it. Thank you for being part of this adventure!

Nice novel. Mystery and excitement at its highest levels. There are many mysterious and incomprehensible things, but I expect them to be revealed later. In short, the novel is beautiful for lovers of mystery and suspense.

Hello dear readers,I am a new author and it's my first book on webnovel. Your support will mean a lot and will motivate me to write better. please do give this story a try. I promise it has many twists and secrets and its full of suspense that'll keep you on edge. The first two chapters might feel slow paced but if you continue, it'll be worth it. And please leave a review and comment your thoughts about the chapters. I want to engage with my readers and make the experience better.

Hello Guys! I'm the author for this series.This is my entry for WSA 2025 and ironically, the first of my work that I'll be posting on here.I'll be posting a new chapter every Saturday(if it works out ^^)I'm not asking for a good review, just your honest opinion.Merry reading!

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W story, cant wait for what youre gonna write next 🔥🔥, loving the chemisrty between the characters and the world building, already gained a fan!

It's a nice novel, I love how there's something new happening every single time

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I really liked how it started, not knowing where she is even though she doesn't know either is very interesting, you can imagine every moment that passes while you are reading.