Brad: (Yukimaru!) -He tries to sway but gets caught on the left side of his chest. The graze then erupts in a javelin of ice that exits both sides of his chest. He drops his blade and coughs out blood as he falls to the ground-
"Em ... for now it's not necessary because I want to continue my sleep, wake me up about 2 or 3 years later." Light lay on the bed and covered his body with blanket.
Im on chapter 181 and I have to say that this book is really good but there r some things I find complete bullshit.... Like how the MC has his girlfriend/wife they seem never to be abke to stay together for a long time all because of some bullshit and then there is her status and on top of that people from her mothers side of the family just pop up out of nowhere and must take her back... for what reason?? The MC dosent ask any questions and on top of that these people never came to see her or come for her before and ontop of that her mother was supposed to be dead do y r they popping up now and saying she is alive??? If that was the case then the mother should have tried to get in contact qith hwr sooner and she should have come herself to see her daughter.... so for all of this to play out the way if is... its all bullshit for me and makes this book suck!! And the MC has "trust issues" so y the hell is he just going to let them go woth his "wife" and only one person as a gard??? he should be going himself and if he doesnt go he should be sending a hole team and that they will not leave her side and if she doesnt return her will destroy thw hole island of Japan... I mean the MC is doing something again that he normally wouldnt do!!! Its bullshit to break character like this and this isnt the first time this has happened in this book!!!
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