hey I had rated as I read it it's pretty decent try reading

This takes me to a different world all together. Feels so real. Characters are introduced subtly but strongly. Love the writing style. This author know his forte…. An immense, incredible work. Keep going. All the best

After reading the title and the synopsis im hooked but i just have one question can mc obtain a never ending lifespan?

The plot of this novel is truly captivating, making all its readers wanting more of it! As the story has its own imaginative and  classical history, it takes the reader into its own world of dragons and swords! Great work 👍

overall a great read i look forward to seeing more and making him get stronger and don't side line the system like that. but it has a lot of potential and it might make a great manga don't slack on this one u hit and run author and I would love to see more characters development that all. and if u don't know who this is then I are semi dumb this is just my personal thoughts.

Hello, Author here. I don’t have too much experience writing novels, but i’ve put a lot of time and effort into this one. Please let me know if you have any advice or critiques! I would love your support and I hope you Enjoy!

I'm really enjoying this story, it's got comedy in it, and sultry teasing between some of the characters, with really great choreographed action scenes.I have snorted at a lot of silly things written here, and also been on edge waiting for what happens next on the action side of things.The story is full of interesting characters like a very lovable giant crab that says so much with such little vocabulary. The hero, which the crab steals the show, but he's awesome too with his quips and banter between everyone including his great friendship with his crab.There are other really fun characters but I don't want to spoil it, but their relationship is something else!The writer does an amazing job updating daily and sometimes you even get 2 or 3 chapters that day which are great reads. Give it a try!

here we go again. because it is from thee this lords know it is a great novel.beside Supreme harem God system now I have to spend coins on another novel.

Interesting read but there are a number of chapters missing around chapter 25 or so. One minute the MC is the forest and the next he is in a city completing a quest with some new female.I also notice it is on hold for now, so I’m guessing the author has perhaps abandoned it and not fixed anything.Still it started to look good then faded out to mediocrity with no responses from the author.

story was going fine and was enjoying him building his own town but then the fiancé is introduced, and it felt like the whole story was ruined. everyone finds her perfect and it instantly becomes forced and unbearable quickly.why im dropping.1st his fiance is also a reincarnated.2nd he is already what feels like the peak of ability.3rd he is 10 years old and he is introducing cars trains, electricity and more to the world in what i believe has only been less than a year.4th everyone instantly becomes dumb around the mc and none find anything odd when he pulls the impossible out his ahh.5th similar to reason 3 everything feels super rushed and forced plot, romance, dialogue. ... maybe come back to check out future chapters if anything changes in a year but doubt it.

What happend, Why did the chapter get removed?!

This is a good novel so far, above average for the genre in my opinion except for one problem that I have. I think the conflict developing with the military is a bit dumb. My first issue is, why would the military behave this way? I understand the mc, in my mind he’s basically a feral animal right now, he feels cornered by the world and like he can’t trust anyone but Charlotte, it’s really good and I’m enjoying it a lot. But this military thing could have played out a lot better, firstly we already know the doctor is working with the military as an informant right? So instead of kidnapping his sister like a bunch of idiots and 100% guaranteeing an antagonistic relationship with a future power house, all they had to do was tell the doctor to tell Arthur “I’m sorry but our treatments are not working, with the current technology and medicine that we have your sisters prognosis is approximately 4 weeks. However if you are interested, I have a friend in the military and they have some advanced treatments that could give her more time or be more effective in treating her, if you want I could talk to them for you. I have to tell you though, I’m only saying this because I can see you are a beta tester, this isn’t an opportunity you can buy with money or influence, I don’t know how strong you are but the military is looking for exceptionally strong beta testers. You would have to prove to them that you are worth the effort and investment but if you are strong and show your value, I am positive that they will at the very least be able to give you’re sister more time.” Any military tactician would have approached it more like this, the doctor is already an insider, instead of doing stupid stuff this would have made Arthur hungry for their help, he would be scared and not trusting but with no other choice he would go them and to make sure he doesn’t lose out on the chance to save his sister he would show them more of his power. Now there’s lots of ways to tweak this to make them fall out later and become enemies, have misunderstandings or whatever if you still want conflict to happen. But to me this is would have been a much smarter approach from the military and makes a lot more sense. Still loving the story so far though!