Shadow Guardian : Bride of Darkness

Really excited for this novel! Watched the drama and loved it (until the last 5 minutes lol) I heard that the novels ending is different so I can’t wait!

In my opinion you have a nice idea but poor world background building,no proper foundation was made and it seemed rushed. No detailed explanation on your country's history, not everyone is versed in your country's history😏

when i read the synopsis i thought this was good novel but after trying read 1 case i give up this novel, it's full of retard plot hole that big enough to make elephant go inside and die from stupidness

The plot moved at a leisurely pace for me. It didn't have to be established right away, but it did pique the interest of those who were attracted by the trope. As I continued to read the novel, I became aware that the MC's backstory was slightly off with his personality. And, given that it is his story, I believe the author is well-versed in it. So, reinforcing that point, I believe the author will go into greater detail about the narrative and the MC. And I believe there will be some growth in him, given he was once a mage and now wishes to become a cultivator for personal reasons. Of course, I suspect there will be a significant plot here, and I am hoping for it.

As a fantasy writer, I kinda like the premise of the story. Though I concentrated on western setting, having read this, made me interested with eastern setting. I am barely familiar with cultivation stories, and this one pulled me into reading. This is a breath of fresh air for me.

I cannot go to school today"Said little Peggy Ann McKay."I have the measles and the mumps,A gash, a rash and purple bumps.My mouth is wet, my throat is dry.I'm going blind in my right eye.My tonsils are as big as rocks,I've counted sixteen chicken pox.And there's one more - that's seventeen,And don't you think my face looks green?My leg is cut, my eyes are blue,It might be the instamatic flu.I cough and sneeze and gasp and choke,I'm sure that my left leg is broke.My hip hurts when I move my chin,My belly button's caving in.My back is wrenched, my ankle's sprained,My 'pendix pains each time it rains.My toes are cold, my toes are numb,I have a sliver in my thumb.My neck is stiff, my voice is weak,I hardly whisper when I speak.My tongue is filling up my mouth,I think my hair is falling out.My elbow's bent, my spine ain't straight,My temperature is one-o-eight.My brain is shrunk, I cannot hear,There's a hole inside my ear.I have a hangnail, and my heart is ...What? What's that? What's that you say?You say today is .............. Saturday?G'bye, I'm going out to play!

Not going to spoiler anything but do yourself a favor and just avoid reading this. A serialized/commercialized books but the quality is truly subpar. Story doesn't make any sense. everything rushed, plotholes here and there,  plain character building/interactions. Some original novels made by people here are miles better than this.

Very good so far! I'm pleased to see the concept the author has made play out so naturally, so far nothing has felt forced, and the MC's character is interesting in a good way!Looking forward to more chapters, good luck author!TL:DR