Existential horror is one of my favourite types of stories solid foundation keep writing even though your small you have greatness in your work i wanna see how arc grows

The story is incredibly exciting right from the start. The world is vividly described, making it easy to imagine, and the setting feels both immersive and detailed. The plot grabs your attention, and by the end of the chapter, you’re eager to see more. Definitely looking forward to exploring this world further!

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THIS BOOK?? A LITERAL WORK OF ART. A DARK, TWISTED, SOUL-DESTROYING MASTERPIECE. I BREATHE FOR THIS STORY ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐"Every time I finish a chapter, I have to sit in SILENCE and process. My brain? Gone. My soul? Sold. My heart? COMPLETELY DESTROYED❤️❤️❤️❤️😩😩😩😩😩😩I came here for a dark thriller, but what I got was a psychological rollercoaster that has officially broken me💯

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So, if you like the concept of Necromancy and System, I recommend this novel.I should especially mention that the great inspiration from DND was enough to bring the novel to the forefront in my eyes.The main character seems to be a colourful person and the main plot of the novel is quite interesting.

WHY 5 STAR REVIEW ?  WELL DUH....ITS'S MY BOOK SO I DID DEFINITELY GIVE A 5 STAR .MY SECOND BOOK GUYS .IT SEEMS I AM GETTING BETTER RIGHT 🫣

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Right now all great keep up.( And also that is same as the top of the stairs elevators) my keyboard did that. Again went to the kitchen and took a break from the vibration one of the

I'm back to review noteworthy novels again!So, to start with, the synopsis stole my attention. (Who doesn't want to read a devoted and whipped misunderstood Male Lead?) Not Me. Alexander is definitely someone whose actions and words are simple. But the overwhelming noble aura he exudes and his handsomeness that added to his charm only made it worse. HOWEVER, funnily enough, Eve is also having the same misunderstanding and with their past together? It only adds so much flavor in their story.Their history started with misunderstanding and a bit of hate (from FL's PoV), but their chemistry will make everything topple out the water and explode. STORY-WISE. it's cliche. But I love satisfying cliches where every idiotic villains get a doused of their medicines. And I'm betting They Will! Plus, the romance is worth reading!Characterization? I'm rating 8/10. Only because I find that Pierre is not that in-depth and troublesome for both the female lead and male lead to be in such deep waters when ML is basically the Male Alpha Pierre wants to be (I'm still not that far into the story and based my perception of Pierre in the chapters I've read of him)Romance? PERFECT! I just love that Alexander can't stop trying to take advances and making his intentions very clear (Hear that, Eve?) Too bad, our FL is kinda dense, and maybe she can't just get past the Alexander that she knew in the past. Overall, I had fun reading the few chapters I've read. It's pretty engaging, keeping me scrolling down the screen just to know what will happen next. (Specifically, what Alex will do and say to make Eve flustered again hehee.)

although the part where he was a coach for 10 years never won a match and was still coaching is kinda impossible to happen, it's just a small part in the novel  mentioned about 3 times so don't judge this whole novel from this part it may be kinda shit part but i really like what came after it,the system is amzaing, the mc is good i like that he started on a very weak team and is building it up, i like the tactics, i like the way he dealt with the team in the beginning etc,the only thing i don't like is that the team grew too fast, where I'm at right now the match with Chelsea ended up 3-4 for Chelsea i would like it if the result ended 1-3 for Chelsea i know it's a novel and it's not supposed to be real but i can't help but feel like they should have taken about untill the start of the next season to do something like this if not moreotherwise it's good i like the journey untill now i would rate it as 6.8/10

We all are same humans. we all are same flesh and blood, but why we hate eachother or envy eachother?, because that's the nature of every beings. It is not only humans, but Lucas Laaran loves the nature and hates it at the same time. If everything was peaceful then there is no fun, but if everything was imperfect then we don't like it. Life is an game which you can't win. you would always lose in the end, so life is not about winning, it's about the experience and the way you live. We kill animals and eat them. no one calls us sadistic, but when we do it to another being similar to us then we are sadistic. It's because we don't care about the lower level beings  but Lucas Laaran sees everything equally. Equally below him. He sees everything as a vessel for a soul. Lucas Laaran maybe sadistic or evil, but if we realise his perspective, then he may not be that evil. It's not my perspective. it's Lucas Laaran's perspective