Writing, I gave 4 because something looks off, you the feel is not coming try seeking inspiration from webnovels like the Supre Magus or Shadow Slave, etc. Updating Stability I gave 5, it is good 9 chapters in 4 days is nice speed, keep it up, but don't burn out. Story Development, I gave 4 because there can be more smoother transitions between scene changes and could add more detailed accounts of events. Character Design, again 4 because you have developed each side character's traits, behavior and overall design from the starting moment they landed in the story, but for the main character, you had made it so confusing. Initially he was much innocent and childish and that makes sense for a three year old but from chapter 4 he sounds like an adult and in case of Drengvar, he is more like a 3 year old but still he too, at the point when Noctis manipulates him, that point really doesn't make much sense dialogue transition got wasted. World Background also 4 Brooch system and Historic content is nice but naming of areas their culture "Byzantine" Is something standing off and we still don't know what's the purpose of having brooches? They are most likely for helping others as I see, but still it needs to be clarified which we expect later in the story at least. You have a lot of facilities given by webnovel app, you may try using the "Auxiliary Chapters And Volumes" For sharing extra information to clarify all these doubts and then to develop a fanbase. Overall, your work is fantastic and decent but still needs some improvements, that I have mentioned. Thank You.

Loving the eerie atmosphere! Can’t wait to see where the story goes.""This gave me chills! The suspense is real!""Finally, a horror novel that actually feels terrifying! Keep it up!"

Thanks for the Books!!!!! 😆 📖🍻Oh, nobody have given a review for this other than the Author? Let me be the first among your readers to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖🍷

interesting book, please keep it up author.

A captivating blend of romance and mystery, this book hooks you instantly! Natasha and Drogen's journey is emotional, thrilling, and ultimately heartwarming. Highly recommended!

....to be the best........to be the goat......

I freaking love this book so much!!!! Xion is so adorable. A literal fluff ball.🤩 My sunshine baby. He ain't dumb like the other protagonists which are common in the type of novels. As for male lead... he is hot 🔥 😆 and with the way things are proceeding he sure gonna be hella possessive over Xion😏, and not in a bad way. Ray is funny 😂.The writing, the characters, the world building... everything is a chef's kiss 😻. It is so beautifully written that you will end up craving for more.

i like the story very much and hope you will provide the raw link

Family drama, transmigration, elemental powers, Zombie/Monster apocalypse, and a love story. Interesting mix.

interesting read author.......keep it up👍

decent writing quality. so far so good, lots of potential. I'll save and maybe come back to it later once I find a few other books and make some room lol .

Your Author here! So excited about this new book. It's so enjoyable to write it so I'm truly hoping that you all enjoy this thrilling ride as well. More updates coming soon! Got loads of chapters stocked up already!