This story is fun and light haha I can't stop my laugh in some chapters its just I need more chapters please author I want more I need more im addicted to this story now.. 🤣🤣😞😩
Short: The Story is an awesome, it is a gem in the mids of a pile of ****ty novels that I came across. Read it! its Smutty! its Detailed! its Good! the Author cares/cared!long version:Writing Quality: The Quality of the writing from the Author is really solid, sometimes there are slight mistakes, but they don't make it difficult to understand what the Author ment.Stability of Updates: The Author does his best to ensure stability of releases and keeping the Quality of the Novel high!Story Development: There are sometimes filler-chapters but they are usally just there to bridge time to develop a plan for the future of the Plot.Character Design: Characters who are repeatedly named and used have a small background story behind them. Main Characters all have excessive background to them or it is getting fleshed out later on in the story.World Background: The World is massive, with different Factions and Minds trying to wrestle for the power to be had.
I like the premise. So I'm gonna go read the raws. Completely finished it. 425 chapters complete. The story is finished. It was ok. I actually felt a little emotional at the end. But I wish they could explain it a little better and not rush it. But overall a good read, to kill time. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌💥💥💥💥
Two years is a long time to stay in one place you are not familiar with. I sympathize with Eleand for being human, and powerless? I hope things will start looking up for him soon. I can't wait to follow him on his adventure.
GEEEEEZ WHAT TOOK U SO LONG TO ADD STUFF TO THIS MAN IVE WAITED FOR MONTHS EVERY DAY YO do do do do do I can't post without more words geez man this is dumb needing a limited to words
absolutely amazing for ur first work, really waiting for new chapters,I hope this novel finds great success. I wish I may see u as a professional writer in the upcoming future 😍
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