thanks for this gem. Like these types of stories and the direction our mc is taken is brilliant, keep up the great work. Came with low expectations, but

İlk okuyucu incelemen benden gelsin yazar.Hikayenin zaman akışı ideal diğer evrim romanlarında olduğu gibi her büyük ilerleme için 100-200 geçmesine gerek yok gibi görünüyorMC'nin et yemekten çekinmemesi için 10 larca bölüm geçmesi gerekmemektedir bence büyük bir + onun dışında mc ilerde murderhobo zihinsel kapasitesi sahip olsa bence iyi olur yazar.İlk bölümleri değerlendirdikten sonraki kısa potansiyel yorumum : Yüksek potansiyele sahip bir evrim hikayesi olabilir sadece efsanevi yeteneklerin biraz daha nadir ve güçlü olması daha iyi olabilirdi sayın yazar.

Quít a different stories. I appreciate you to making more chapters. Very good quality farr from my friend novel. Keep continue brothers! I will watching how this novel could go farther

Great read. Gore and interesting. The FL is witty and the ML is a complementary serious character as a balance

First of all, a synopsis for the story would be a really big help for the story hehe. The story is actually good honestly. It’s well written, the emotions can be felt as you read it, and the characters design as well.

Good book, lots of interesting action and awesome writing quality the author has some good writing technics and abilities, I would like to see this book at the top

It's good for having a good time, but it falls short in many ways. The writing is very erratic. It constantly switches from first person to third person or worse, a combination of both. The characters behave in strange ways, it seems like they are all either completely against or completely in favor of the protagonist, there are never any gray areas. The protagonist is also strange. She always seems to apply morality to whatever suits her at the moment. He kills dozens of knights for invading, but then mourns the death of a couple of elves. Power levels are also in flux.Finally, I think the novel doesn't do a lot of the things it wants to do very well. There are basically no fights, the system basically doesn't exist. She has no problem running the kingdom where everyone adores her. Politics are very superficial. Then you have the merchant subplot. In short, it's fun, but you have to turn off your brain a little if you're even remotely critical.

Great book so far be great to see more chapters  available to read

The book have great storyline. Captures the real feeling about having crush. And the chemistry between the characters is getting hot chapter by chapter.

Well written novel, quite good character design. Maybe for someone who dislike fast paced and overpowered mc novel, this is not your cup of tea. So far there is no forced event, everything flows naturally. Decent novel with good prospect.

my brother  good writing nice thoughts deep words used man ✨✨

An advice...work better on your book synopsis. Just saying, this is the journey of this person and this person does not do enough justice to the book's quality content. A little more details might help to get potential readers attention.Nice work though. continue.